hook71 Posted September 29, 2012 Share Posted September 29, 2012 I'm going to report some potential typos for BG1 NPC v20 in this thread. bg1npc_tmp.tra: @2 I have expressed interest to my 'father', and he had promised to include me within the operations along the Sword Coast. had -> has (7x) Reiltar -> Rieltar (which would match @575) @9 Grants profeciency in Sword and Shield style while equipped. profeciency -> proficiency @65 = ~This shield has have been through many battle - and lost every one.~ has have -> has battle -> battles @312 = ~Mithril Ring~ Mithril -> Mithral (The GTUL in the BG2 Fixpack changes this for vanilla game. I would suggest a change in this mod as well for consistency) @313 = ~A ring is a small band of precious metal that is used as jewelry. At the first glance this appears to be a simple silver ring, but any Dwarf could point out a good dozen of qualities, that would tell you that the ring is made of mithril, also called 'truesilver', and many other names besides. This remarkable metal is supple and easy to work. It can be polished to shimmer like silver that never tarnishes, and it is stronger than steel. While not enchanted yet, it might be only a matter of time. Sorcerers like mithril artifacts, due to the superior durability of this metal. It might be worthwhile to hold on to the ring.~ (2x) mithril -> mithral @361, @362 Proficiency Type: Blunt Weapons Blunt Weapons -> Club @392 = ~Coran presented you with these bunch and assured you that these flowers were given to him by the Twelve Months.~ these bunch and assured you that these flowers -> this bunch of flowers and assured you that they @480 This is your engagement ring Ajantis gave to you. The ring is Ilvastarr family treasure. It is ornamented in rather a plain way, with only a few elaborate decorations around a light-blue gem. -> This is the engagement ring that Ajantis gave to you. The ring is an Ilvastarr family treasure. It is ornamented in a rather plain way, with only a few elaborate decorations around a light-blue gem. @575 All the markings are there, and it would explain Gorion's curiosity of my studies, as well as <CHARNAME>'s being mentioned in the prophecy. <CHARNAME>'s -> <CHARNAME> @630 To make that posssibility less likely, Winski commissioned a nabassu to build an amulet that would ward off evil creatures long enough to gain control of them. posssibility -> possibility p#brlt.tra: @111 = ~'Tis an old legend, <CHARNAME>. Some say a great battle and bold unravelled on that shore, and the pack of greater seawolves devoured a tribe of sahaugin, fish creatures. The werewolves succeeded in driving off the interlopers, but, in their own turn, were hunted and killed by my people. Others insist that a great warrior of some renown challenged the beasts' leader to a fight, and killed him in a fair battle, making the remaining wolves scatter.~ the pack of greater seawolves -> a pack of greater seawolves sahaugin -> sahuagin @181 = ~Let us go, then, friend. You've relieved my heart of its deadly weights yet again, and I am most grateful. *winks* Methlinks that hour of inspecting your hammer is not far away.~ weights -> weight Methlinks that -> Methinks the @267 = ~Gods do not rule our lives in every detail, 'tis true. But they have the power to change one's life from within, if one opens up to then. I dedicated myself to Tempus, and thus my soul sparks with his divine grace and greatness. ~ then -> them @302 = ~I am afraid we have different idea on beauty. 'Tis a crucial difference.~ idea -> ideas @306 = ~That will be not needed, Branwen. I prefer to admire you with my eyes.~ be not -> not be @307 = ~I see it as a challenge. I am going to prove you that I have fine knowledge of the science of tender passion, and of its linguistic applications.~ prove you -> prove to you @409 = ~And that gnome stood by your side and done nothing...~ done -> did @489 = ~'Tis a bad example, <CHARNAME>~ @490 = ~Bad example indeed, <CHARNAME>~ <CHARNAME> -> <CHARNAME>. @502 = ~My thoughts turned to our current path, and I found it barren and unsatisfying. Not your path, surely. Your destiny is bright and promising, and foes flee your wrath in most disgraceful and hurried manner. 'Twas my failures I was repulsed with, for I neglected my duties greatly. I no longer revel in righteous battles, and neither do I seek proving myself in Tempus's eyes. I spend hours awake stroking your hair and dreading the moment you stir, because it would mean another march, and another battle. I have come to fear death, while months before, every day was a fine day to die.~ Tempus's -> Tempus' p#ciflirt.tra: @0 = ~*You open your eyes. The dawn is nearing, but the sky above you is still dark, and dotted with a myriad of shining stars. The air is laden with sleepy calm. For a moment you lay, listening to the silence and wondering what had woken you... A strange foreboding... not one of foes coming from the darkness, or the restless dreams of late, but a feeling that something wonderful is afoot, and you would be a fool to sleep though it. On nights like this, the Magical Weave of Toril seems to be as tangible as your own body. Not a sound touches the forest canopy.*~ lay -> lie though -> through @3 = ~*Slowly Coran lifts himself on tip-toe and stretches upward. His calves bulge from the effort, but the movement is as natural as the swaying of the reeds. Unheard song pushes him along and, as if barely containing himself, Coran dances in small steps, then breaks free and runs. Three times he stops, each time for an ever more passionate and long fuette. He is the wind, the cruel wind, that blows away the mists of the night. Then, he is a bud again. Waving gracefully with his torso as the song’s pre-dawn wind blows, he opens up to the sun. To the real sun... for the first pale-green light invades the sky.*~ fuette -> fouetté @49 = ~Are you trying to tell me that kissing a heiresses to the Lord of Murder is titillating?~ a heiresses -> an heiress @226 = ~*This night you dream of a carnival, wild fun, music and wine pouring out on the streets. Masked and dressed in bright finery, you dance in the crowd, and man after man vies for your attention, and merry kisses and laughter. One of your suitors looks taller and most tireless than the rest. It's to him that you send not-too-subtle glances from behind your feathered mask, the glances he eagerly returns. The night promises to be long, and the morning will find you feeling the familiar excitement of taking a new lover.*~ your attention, and merry kisses and laughter -> your attention, merry kisses and laughter most tireless -> more tireless the glances he eagerly returns -> glances he eagerly returns p#corlt.tra: @31 = ~<CHARNAME>, <CHARNAME>, I hope that one of those day you shall abandon your scowl for a smile. It would suit you nicely.~ those day -> these days @147 = ~*smile* If you do feel so strongly, my friend, than a few short days... or weeks... or even years should change nothing.~ than -> then @189 = ~I prefer to stay off the roads all together. I do not want to walk in the tracks of the others.~ all together -> altogether in the tracks of the others -> in the tracks of others @288 = ~Were I a slave in Mulhorand, once a day I would catch a glimpse of your sandals while protrating myself on the marble floor at your feet, and I would be the happiest man in Mulhorand.~ protrating -> prostrating @345 = ~*A plump serving wench giggles over something Coran is whispering to her. Her hoop earnings dangle, and she presses her palm to her abundant bosom. "You’ve always been such a kidder, Master Coran!" she exclaims, but eagerly settles herself on Coran’s lap. Coran wraps his arm around her waist, and an easy smile curves his lips. The elf shares a cup of wine with her, and licks a few spilled scarlet droplets from her skin. Suddenly he lifts his head and searches the common room with his gaze, frowning worriedly when he does not see you where he had last left you. Coran suddenly gets up, and with a charming grin and quiet words he slips a few coins down the maid’s bodice. Then he leaves, and the woman stares for a few moments after him, with a surprised expression on her face.*~ earnings -> earrings see you where he had last left you -> see you where he last left you @346 = ~You follow Coran to his room. The door is not locked, so you take a look inside.~ @347 = ~You spend the rest of the night drinking, brooding and giving dark looks to the plump wench.~ @348 = ~You take your leave of the common room and hit the sack. Love or not, this day was trying, and tomorrow is also likely to test you to your limits.~ Need to add * to the beginning and end of the lines. @355 = ~Yes. Unless you’d share my cold blankets, <CHARNAME>. *sighs heavily* Do not expect me to apologize. I am not made of mithril! *smirks* Besides, it was you who showed up in my head, uninvited and bare-naked, and destroyed a perfectly nice fling.~ mithril -> mithral @435 = ~That’s quite... large. Whatever happened that it became but a patch of greenery betwixt the human Empires build on the sand?~ build -> built @690 = ~Does it matter tonight? Let tomorrow find it’s own answers. Here and now... the grass is like silk, and the silence will allow us to hear every sigh, every caress and every-~ it's -> its @719 = ~Yes, I can see that. Makes me wonder what my is place among your priorities? Tenth? Twentieth? Oh, do not bother to reply.~ is place -> place is @826 = ~<CHARNAME> of Candlekeep, daughter of Gorion, I love you. My love will not fade, and to you alone my heart is given. No matter what should transpire on my lonely walks, they will all end by your campfire. You arms, beloved, are my home, and by your side I will stay. By the stars and the sun and the twelve winds so I, Coran Sullussaer swear.~ @827 = ~Yes, sit... *kneels by your side* <CHARNAME> of Candlekeep, daughter of Gorion, I love you. My love will not fade, and to you alone my heart is given. No matter what should transpire on my lonely walks, they will all end by your campfire. You arms, beloved, are my home, and by your side I will stay. By the stars and the sun and the twelve winds so I, Coran Sullussaer, swear.~ You arms -> Your arms @850 = ~*What’s the matter? What’s the matter?! I... I am ready to give you everything, and you peer at barmaids!~ *What’s -> What's @1110 = ~Oh, cap it. Plenty of are base-borns raised high in human society. Why, even in your own Tethyr, there was a half-elven bastard Kymer who succeeded King Alemander II or some such.~ Plenty of are base-borns raised high -> Plenty of base-born rise high @1121 = ~Hey, what this sigh’s for? I think I know what you need, fireheart.~ what this sigh’s for -> what's this sigh for @1261 = ~You are right. I will start thinking on what I’d want to do, rather than wondering across the land and slaying everything I perceive as an enemy.~ wondering -> wandering @1285 = ~That’s my girl! *Coran kisses you on your cheek first, than on your lips... and again...* Sweetling, do not you think that it’s long past time that we... erm... halted for rest?~ kisses you on your cheek first, than on your lips -> kisses you on the cheek first, then on the lips @1354 = ~Yet, you insisted that I something... good. I was lucky that it was you by my side that day or, as the Seldarine know, I would have acted like a selfish brat.~ I something -> I should do something @1424 = ~The next thing I knew, I was standing in the middle of the busy street in Baldur’s Gate, hugging a strange woman who sobbed into my shoulder. In a moment, she wiped her tears away and straightened. You met Yago... he was quite apt at devouring the very last shred of happiness from his wife. Brielbara was determined to snatch out of his jaws whatever she could. Rarely have I met woman who plunged into an affair with such decisiveness and passion.~ met woman -> met a woman @1440 = ~On the second thought... will 1000 gold suffice?~ On the second thought -> On second thought Link to comment
hook71 Posted September 29, 2012 Author Share Posted September 29, 2012 p#crnpc.tra: @37 = ~*angrily* Shut you mouth, barbarian!~ you -> your @61 = ~Wha? Really, I'm not.~ Wha -> What @85 = ~O, Henali... You see, Minsc...~ Henali -> Hanali @102 = ~By Tempus’s axe! You two do need to be quieter. Minsc is not the only one who cannot find sleep till the very last "Oh, <CHARNAME>".~ Tempus’s -> Tempus’ @149 = ~Nagging. While it does not look much like much compared to flogging, in the long term, it curbs a male like nothing else!~ look much like much -> look like much @153 = ~It’s all surfacer’s folly. *spits* You should walk less by day through the inferno, then may be you will start thinking straight.~ may be -> maybe @201 = ~I know you are not a talkative type, but for Henali’s sake, how long you were intending to stay silent?! Until we met under her blankets?~ a talkative type -> the talkative type Henali’s -> Hanali's @215 = ~*Claps Ajantis on the shoulder.* But do not be discouraged, my friend. There are woman around who are not in love with me. That drow girl looks only on you, I swear.~ woman -> women on -> at @268 = ~Erm...Kivan, there is no such a thing as untrue love.~ no such a thing -> no such thing p#fw2700.tra: @1 = ~A black coach and team of horses passes you, bearing Gorion back to his resting place in CandleKeep.~ CandleKeep -> Candlekeep setup.tra: @1117 = ~Select Ajantis's Romance Speed:~ Ajantis's -> Ajantis' x#addial_tmp.tra: @38 = ~It’s a topic I do not care to explore. Lets drop the topic until another time, Ajantis.~ Lets drop the topic -> Let's drop it @61 = ~You... may have a point there, Ajantis. Perhaps I should apologize for my attitude. I've not long been out of Candlekeep, and I am still adjusting to the loss of Gorion. Anyway, what you were you saying about siege warfare?~ what you were you -> what were you @71 = ~There is, but it’s not a very glamorous one. Rather then being inspired by a heroic battle or a tragic love story, it is simply an emblem, based on a mosaic by my great-grandfather. He refused to tread the warrior’s path, choosing instead to be an artist. His legacy was the wish for his family not to become conceited and arrogant of their own achievements.~ then -> than @76 = ~No, I’m not so fortunate as to know the origins of my family. I was raised by Gorion of Candlekeep, but I am not his natural child. My past is as unclear as my future. Still, there is no need for us to sit here and reiterate my own tragic tale, especially when it is so recent. Come, lets move along.~ lets -> let's @78 = ~Besides, the story of Ilvastarr's crest is not a very glamorous one. Rather then being inspired by a heroic battle or tragic love story, it is simply an emblem, based on a mosaic by my great-grandfather. He refused to tread the warrior’s path, choosing instead to be an artist. His legacy was the wish for his family not to become conceited and arrogant of their own achievements.~ Ilvastarr's crest -> the Ilvastarr crest then -> than conceited and arrogant of -> conceited and arrogant about @126 = ~What! You think of beasts as lesser? Fool <PRO_RACE>! Oh! I HAVE it! You are simply a <PRO_RACE>! <PRO_RACE>s are beasts like any other, so there is no point to look for another beast similar to you in <PRO_HIMHER> mannerism. ~ <PRO_HIMHER> -> <PRO_HISHER> @154 = ~Nobody is an orphan! The Great Mother cares for all of her children. As for woman who birthed me, I do not know. The tribe offered me to the druids, when I was a newborn. ~ for woman -> for the woman @179 = ~The Red Wizards of Thay hold the darkest secrets of the strongest magic! The weakest of our Zulkir could grind that pathetic Elminster of yours to dust with a flick of her finger. (I hold more power in my pinky then <PRO_HESHE> does in <PRO_HISHER> dry little brain, I am sure.)~ then -> than @193 = ~Magocracy does not sound like a very good way of governing to me... True mages should be removed from the affairs of the world to practices true arcane art.~ practices -> practice @327 = ~Yes, its there, right? ~ its -> it's @340 = ~*You keep your rebelious dinner down. There is a reason to why the songs call you the Hero of the Sword Coast!*~ rebelious -> rebellious to why -> why @398 = ~Of dear Barzenak? Why ever for? No. He tried to become a lich... didn't quite make it. They stuffed him, I as I heard it, and sat him in the hallway of his former home. The new owner claimed his effigy keeps the zombies up to their work.~ I as I -> as I @439 = ~I don't see why you bother cleaning your amour, knightling. Each blood stain is a mark of victory.~ amour -> armour x#ajantisaddlts_pr.tra: @69 = ~My lady... <CHARNAME>, is it really your wish to wear this strange belt, with it's... consequences? I hope you don't mind if I will address you as "my lady" nonetheless... But, forgive my direct words, I would prefer you get it removed as soon as possible.~ it's -> its @70 = ~My love... <CHARNAME>, is it really your wish to wear this strange belt, with it's... consequences? How should I call you now, is "my lady" still appropriate? This is confusing me to no end... If I may say so, I would prefer you get it removed as soon as possible.~ it's -> its How should I call you now, is "my lady" still appropriate? -> How should I call you now? Is "my lady" still appropriate? x#ajantisbhaallts.tra: @84 = ~But it is not yet set in stone *how* the things will come to pass. You destiny, your future can be different, depending on what you chose. I have to know how you will decide!~ the things -> things You destiny -> Your destiny chose -> choose how you will decide -> what you will decide @116 = ~What do you mean, my love?! I swore to be with you, and to watch over you. I swore to walk the path of goodness and righteousness together with you. But I cannot do this, if you do not trust me! All I'm doing is asking you to answers my questions honestly!~ answers -> answer @122 = ~What do you mean, my love! I swore to be with you, and to watch over you. I swore to walk the path of goodness and righteousness together with you. But I cannot do this, if you do not trust me! All I'm doing is asking you to answers my questions honestly!~ love! -> love?! answers -> answer @152 = ~So you where actually thinking of letting me down?! This is not what I was expecting, after all your professions of endless love and devotion.~ where -> were x#ajantischallenges_pr.tra: @14 = ~Silver light on silver scales, Flashes high above the dales, Like mithril shining in the night Reflects the glow of pale moonlight. As graceful as elven bards do sing, Silver dragons soar on silver wings.~ mithril -> mithral x#ajantisiniflirts_pr.tra: @1 = ~That's very kind of you, Ajantis. I'd be happy If you would carry some of my things~ If -> if things -> things. x#ajantislts_pr.tra: @41 = ~My lady, I told you I am a squire paladin of the Most Holy Order of the Radiant Heart. May I tell you more about this force of goodness and righteousness?~ Most Holy Order of the Radiant Heart -> Most Noble Order of the Radiant Heart @85 = ~Any paladin or goodly fighter who strives to uphold just laws, can become a knight, despite his or her origin. Would you be interested in becoming a knight of the Order of the Most Radiant Heart?~ Order of the Most Radiant Heart -> Order of the Radiant Heart @294 = ~How is it you became paladin, Ajantis?~ became paladin -> became a paladin @298 = ~I went directly to the local chapter of the Order of the Most Radiant Heart, and now I am here.~ Order of the Most Radiant Heart -> Order of the Radiant Heart @470 = ~*pass your palm over your eyes* How do you console a daughter who'd seen her beloved father slaughtered? Help me find the ones responsible for his murder. It would make his death easier to bear.~ who'd -> who has @491 = ~Well, thinking about it, I had little contact with the kids of my own age except for Imoen. But there were nice people around: Dreppin, the stable master, Fuller, the commander of Candlekeep Guard, and Hull, one of the guards. Then there was Phylidia, the mage whose absent-mindedness was well known, and of course Winthrop, the jolly innkeeper.~ @498 = ~As you wish. Thinking about it, I had little contact with kids my own age, except for Imoen. But there were nice people around: Dreppin, the stable master, Fuller, the commander of Candlekeep Guard, and Hull, one of the guards. Then there was Phylidia, the mage whose absent-mindedness was well known, and of course Winthrop, the jolly innkeeper.~ Phylidia -> Phlydia @514 = ~My lady, as I have already told you I am trying to win glory and honor to get knighted by the Order of the Most Radiant Heart. This is my goal, and I'm eagerly awaiting the day of my anointment.~ Order of the Most Radiant Heart -> Order of the Radiant Heart @728 = ~I can imagine that for a son of a noble family,, it is very important to have a wife who thrives in her role as a mother and the lady of the house. A woman for whom representing her family matters more than having a life of her own.~ family,, -> family, her role as a mother and the lady of the house -> her role as a mother and lady of the house @952 = ~Maybe another men would, <CHARNAME>. But what do you want?~ men -> man @1064 = ~Although I am taken aback by your words, I am glad you see it that way, my love. *Ajantis kisses you on the cheek* I want you to enjoy being with me, and I am sorry if I could not please you last night. Now Let's get up. Duty is calling, as always.~ Let's -> let's x#ajantisnpc_talks_pr.tra: @0 = ~Tell me, Jaheira and Khalid, you are travelling together and it is obvious that you are... enjoying your closeness. But your path is leading you to very dangerous places... Did it ever enter your mind that you would actually prefer your weaker part to be somewhere safe at home while the other one is out doing the traveling and fighting?~ traveling -> travelling x#ajint.tra: @33 = ~It is was the right choice not to ally with this evil creature, <CHARNAME>!~ It is was -> It was @39 = ~We will be working for the *thieves guild*? <CHARNAME>, I have problems reconciling this with my duties as a paladin! But I will use this opportunity to have a closer look at what is going here. I surely hope the motivation for this cooperation is more than that of increasing your wealth through illegal activity.~ going here -> going on here x#ajpcfl_tmp.tra: @105 = ~*On Ajantis' face is a stern expression of concentration and vigilance, almost making him appear to be frowning. His skin is taned from all the time spent outside, and his shaving is flawless.*~ taned -> tanned @120 = ~*Ajantis' winces slightly at your touch, although waiting motionless until you have finished.*~ @121 = ~*Ajantis' frowns at your touch, although waiting motionless until you have finished.*~ Ajantis' -> Ajantis although waiting -> but waits @123 = ~*Ajantis' lowers his head so you can reach better, looking away.*~ Ajantis' -> Ajantis @126 = ~*You start polishing a pretended stain on his armour on his breast plate, leaning forward while doing so...*~ stain on his armour on his breast plate -> stain on his breast plate @133 = ~*Ajantis stands motionless until you finished.* Thank you, my lady.~ finished -> finish @143 = ~Well, my neck is somehow tense...~ somehow -> somewhat @162, @169, @175, @178, @179, @180, @181, @182, @288 back pack -> backpack @177 = ~If this is enough to ease your pain, we should take this moment, my lady... Although I suggest that we not to stay in this place too long.~ not to stay -> do not stay @223 = ~I am exausted... We should take a small rest to gather our strength, my love.~ @225 = ~I am tired, my love. It has been a long day, and we are exausted. Let us rest, and prepare for tomorrow.~ exausted -> exhausted Link to comment
hook71 Posted September 29, 2012 Author Share Posted September 29, 2012 x#alint.tra: @5 = ~*whispering* I, err... I don't think is such a good idea...~ is -> it's @32 = ~Some of us just 'aint cut out for the life. No shame in, though.~ 'aint -> ain't in -> in it x#alora.tra: @220 = ~He-he, don't worry, Immy. You can have him back now... but maybe you'd better keep a closer eye your stuff next time!~ eye your -> eye on your @258 = ~If I give ye mouth to mouth, you'd be sure to get hammered from the all the ale I drank the night before.~ from the all -> from all the night before -> last night x#bri.tra: @4 = ~I hope that I still have some influence over her... *grins* so it should not take me long to presuade her to take money and visits instead of me babysitting Namara on battlefields. Meet me back in the "Sturgeon", <CHARNAME>.~ presuade -> persuade @13 = ~Well, I am afraid that in this case we should part our company. ~ @15 = ~Well, I am afraid that in this case we should part our company.~ @21 = ~Well, I am afraid that in this case we should part our company. See you in 20 years or so...~ part our company -> part company x#brint.tra: @4 = ~No! <CHARNAME> gave you <PRO_HISHER> leave, but you don't have mine! Rise your weapons!~ Rise -> Raise x#challenge.tra: @0 = ~Coran, I see you smiling the whole day long. What fills you with this everlasting feeling of childish joy? Do you close your eyes to the evil occurrences around us? Does the misery of the people we pass makes you grin?~ makes -> make @20 = ~*Turns red* I wasn't looking at her solely to entertain myself with the beauty of her appearnace, like you seem to do, elf. My eyes wander to Lady <CHARNAME> because I am watching over her as a vigilant companion on our dangerous travels! ~ appearnace -> appearance @26 = ~*With anger mounting in his voice* I don't need your mockery, Coran! I see enough 'fiery gusts' in your wanton glances for three men! If you aren't careful, she will burst into flames just from your constantly staring!~ constantly -> constant @43 = ~I would like thee to set a Challenge for Lord Ajantis Ilvastaar of Waterdeep and the good elf Coran of Tethyr.~ @53 = ~The Lady <CHARNAME> had declared her decision! She will entertain the suit of Lord Ajantis Ilvastaar of Waterdeep. Coran of Tethyr, as per our agreement, thou shalt not seek <CHARNAME>'s favor from now on.~ @54 = ~The Lady <CHARNAME> had declared her decision! She will entertain the suit of Coran of Tethyr. Lord Ajantis Ilvastaar of Waterdeep, as per our agreement, thou shalt not seek <CHARNAME>'s favor from now on.~ @56 = ~The Lady <CHARNAME> had declared her decision! Lord Ajantis Ilvastaar of Waterdeep, my good elf Coran of Tethyr, as per our agreement, ye shall not seek <CHARNAME>'s favor from now on.~ @57 = ~The Lady <CHARNAME> had declared her decision! Lord Ajantis Ilvastaar of Waterdeep, my good elves Xan of Evereska and Coran of Tethyr, as per our agreement, ye shall not seek <CHARNAME>'s favor from now on.~ Ilvastaar -> Ilvastarr @55 = ~The Lady <CHARNAME> had declared her decision! Above all men, Xan of Eeverska is the dearest to her heart. Lord Ajantis Ilvastaar of Waterdeep, my good elf Coran of Tethyr, as per our agreement, ye shall not seek <CHARNAME>'s favor from now on.~ Eeverska -> Evereska Ilvastaar -> Ilvastarr @136 = ~*Quietly and quickly, to <CHARNAME>* ~ ~Sweetling, the way I see it, we have two choices: You run for it while I stay behind to entertain the dragon, or I stop this farce, and I fight her...~ <CHARNAME>* ~ ~Sweetling -> <CHARNAME>* Sweetling @191 = ~Silver light on silver scales, Flashes high above the dales, Like mithril shining in the night Reflects the glow of pale moonlight. As graceful as elven bards do sing, Silver dragons soar on silver wings.~ mithril -> mithral x#coint.tra: @46 = ~Er... how long you are going to stay in this cave, anyway?~ you are -> are you @98 = ~<CHARNAME>, <CHARNAME>! Please, take a look at my ears. Are they curling and withering like blossoms under the harsh winds of winter? Why is that the most pompous fools come with the loudest and foulest of voices?~ Why is that -> Why is it that x#coran.tra: @44 = ~After the elf has heroically slain the foul orc, there is only one thing left for him to do. He will die in sad reverie about his kin’s glorious past and amind regrets of his inability to prevent thier inevitable demise. Then a dwarf will come by and will try to bury him, but, while digging his grave, he is as like as not to find a vein of mithril. So he’d use the tree to smelt the metal and he will have no time among his labors to worry about the elven corpse... And that is why elves dislike the dwarves.~ amind -> amid thier inevitable -> their inevitable will come by and will try -> will come by and try mithril -> mithral he'd use -> he'll use elves dislike the dwarves -> elves dislike dwarves @57 = ~Who is not? Relax, <CHARNAME>, I do allow that an orc could be a noble exception to his race and that an elf could kill a tree for some dark purpose, and I can even imagine a generous dwarf, adventurous halfling,or a human who did not lust for the things others have...~ halfling,or -> halfling, or who did not lust -> who does not lust @122 = ~Loves means life, <CHARNAME>, and one can never think of either too much.~ Loves -> Love @153 = ~Oh, all right, I cannot stand this pathetic display helplessness. A longer rest will not hurt us. Go back to sleep, Coran, and let me try to lull Namara... while we still have arrows left.~ display helplessness -> display of helplessness @158 = ~Your shield bears a sigil, but it is not Helms’ eye. Would that be you family’s coat of arms?~ Helms’ -> Helm's @172 = ~Oh, that’s when that wizard caught you with his wife and you had to flee the Gate?~ that's -> that was @273 = ~Such grace and finesse in motion. Imoen, watching you to pick locks is a pleasure to my sore eyes. So much incompetence around...~ you to pick locks -> you pick locks @276 = ~*giggles* How’d you know that? Do you come up to a person and ask if he can afford to be robbed? Or do you leave a message in a house you have just picked clean with your address, so they can reach you in case if they’d want stuff back?~ in case if they’d -> in case they’d @297 = ~Oh, yes, definitely, seeing how that that was the only way we could get across. Now, if I was paranoid, like some mad wizard, I would suspect that some mischievous and heavy-handed deity designed our travel plans so that we would have no choice but to run in to you.~ that that -> that run in to you -> run into you @306 = ~I am glad we came to some understanding. And by the Oaths of Sylvanus, if you'd dare to call me yours again, I’ll... Sylvanus -> Silvanus @309 = ~Coran, let her cry. You have to make her to get used to a schedule.~ her to get -> her get @354 = ~‘Tis true. The lodge is a place for legendary warriors to meet and their trade tales of fights with evil, manly deeds and manly talk.~ and their trade -> and trade @373 = ~With somethin', I suppose. 'twas pretty messy when I left. This rich feller comes by with a sack o' coin fer the preacher. His sins were plugging him or some such rot, so the idiot decides to give in hopes o' gettin' unplugged. Alla same, he were a sight more liberal in his givin' then he meant, I'd wager. Preacher, too. Between 'em, they givin' cured me o' poverty fer quite a time.~ then -> than they givin' -> their givin' @430 = ~BAH!!! Foolish slave, power is the sixth sense for one *born* to rule! Tiax shall be waited on hand and foot by comely slaves! Tiax's armies shall lay waste to the land, and erect mighty statues in his honor! Tiax shall build a palace which, on it's own, shall make the mightiest human cities look paltry in comparison! All shall hail Tiax as lord and master, and only then shall he be pleased!~ to the land, and erect mighty statues -> to the land and erect mighty statues it's -> its x#cosqu.tra: @27 = ~Amelia said that you'd try to sally her name! You will die for that!~ @34 = ~Amelia said that you'd try to sally her name! You will die for that! ~ @46 = ~She said that you'd try to sally her name! You will die for that!~ sally -> sully @153 = ~How very kind of you, my <PRO_LADYLORD>... There is one more favor I request of you. Nathan has powders on his person, powders that belong to me. I need them very much... to become free. Please, bring them to me. I must have them.~ Nathan -> Natan @202 = ~Amelia We have encountered a maiden, apparently betrothed to a thief, who is hiding from her in the Firewine Bridge ruins. Apparently, Amelia cannot enter the ruins, but she cannot depart the area, either, until giving her fiancé a "yes" or "no" response - in the form of white and red roses, respectively. We agreed to restore to life a bunch of withered roses for her, and give it to this wretch, Natan. According to Amelia, it will set her free her from her vow.~ a thief, who -> a thief who set her free her from her vow -> set her free from her vow @208 = ~Amelia We have encountered a maiden, apparently betrothed to a thief, who is hiding from her in the Firewine Bridge ruins. Apparently, Amelia cannot enter the ruins, but she cannot depart the area, either, until giving her fiancé a "yes" or "no" response - in the form of white and red roses, respectively. We agreed to restore to life a bunch of withered roses for he,r and give it to this wretch Natan. According to Amelia, it will set her free her from her vow.~ a thief, who -> a thief who he,r -> her set her free her from her vow -> set her free from her vow @251 = ~Powders? So Nathan did not lie...~ @252 = ~You lied to me about the roses! Nathan was right about you, then!~ Nathan -> Natan x#dynah.tra: @235 = ~Minsc, it might be well afore I would return back to Rashemen. Dost thou wish to go home sooner, thou needest only tell me. Thy dejemma is all but fulfilled now.~ Dost thou wish -> Should thou wish dejemma -> dajemma x#dynaquest.tra: @145 = ~*You step between Dynaheir and Winski and begin to speak softly yet firmly.* I answer not to an Othlor, but to Sylvanus and the Great Mother and I do not care what scroll you have or have not about you. If lady Dynaheir does not agree to be taken away, I will ensure that she won't be.~ Sylvanus -> Silvanus @196 = ~We have friends to send the mesage through, but you worry needlessly.~ mesage -> message x#dyro.tra: @66, @76, @89, @97, @193, @198, @879, @1130, @1328, @1364 wizardress -> wizardess @84 = ~I have read a manuscript, but it strikes me,that thou art of a nation that descends from Raumvira, and therefore thine account wilt be filled with liveliness, which I failed to find in the scroll.~ me,that -> me that thine account -> thy account @314 = ~Well, if a mediocre scholar can achieve grandeur by recording tomes of pointless verses, than there is hope for all of us.~ than -> then @319 = ~I am ashamed to admit that the only one I recall is anecdotal, Hathran. Year 1263 - The Year of Tressym... "In the town of the moon, Birds for Lady shalt croon... " I recall it whispered that Lady Alustriel simply shrugged, pointing out that Alaundo's prophesies are about as widespread as the tressym that year... who indeed roosted on the rooftops of Silverymoon for a tenday.~ prophesies -> prophecies @334 = ~I am ashamed to admit that the only one I recall is anecotal, Hathran. Year 1263 - The Year of Tressym... "In the town of the moon, Birds for Lady shalt croon... " I recall it whispered that Lady Alustriel simply shrugged, pointing out that Alaundo's prophesies are about as widespread as the tressym that year... who indeed roosted on the rooftops of Silverymoon for a tenday.~ anecotal -> anecdotal prophesies -> prophecies @394 = ~More? Than thou will have to wait until I take a breath in... I will need to hold it for the revelation.~ @397 = ~More? Than you will have to wait until I take a breath in... I'll hold it for the revelation.~ Than -> Then take a breath in -> take a breath @446 = ~Let me guess - that caused flooding, and the Thay armies tried to march in ,while the Hathran were distracted with repairing damages.~ Thay armies -> Thayvian armies march in ,while the Hathran were distracted with repairing damages -> march in, while the Hathran were distracted with repairing the damage @564 = ~I doubt not that thou can follow this path as sturdily as any other. *takes your hand and traces the lines on your palm thoughtfully* There waits for thee a true love... love that is stronger than grief, that is coming out of troubles and pain purer and brighter - like a mithril blade comes out of the heat and soot of a dwarven forge.~ thou can -> thou canst mithril -> mithral @599 = ~This journey was shorter than my first one. I rode down the Golden Way to the port of Telfamar in Thesk, and sailed to Saerloon. And there, after studying with a friend of mine in the Temple of Mystra, I bought passage across the Dargonmere to Westgate.~ Thesk, and sailed -> Thesk and sailed Dargonmere -> Dragonmere @1501 = ~Ah, but I added a couple of special herbs to the bath water. There are fragrances, I was taught, that tickle woman's nostrils and hint gently that a certain man is irresistible. Now tell me, Hathran, did I do a proper job of it? *Drape your arm around Dynaheir's shoulders.*~ tickle woman's -> tickle a woman's @1841 = ~I know. Loyalty and duty art qualities that he neither posses himself, nor strives to cultivate in his followers. He even rejected the woman who sincerely loves him. That is why I believe that thee, not Sarevok, will win in the end.~ posses -> possesses sincerely loves -> sincerely loved thee -> thou Link to comment
hook71 Posted September 29, 2012 Author Share Posted September 29, 2012 x#dyronpc.tra: @29 = ~I disapprove of allowing jalulks to priesthood, but I suppose he is a good compliment to your witless warder.~ jalulks -> jaluks compliment -> complement @58 = ~Splattering blood... eek... I hate that myself. It's something I didn't quite expect... Eldoth never told me anything about it... Or about the... uhm... smell when bodies become bloated in the sun... Erm... excuse me, Dynaheir, but I... I think I'm going to sick up...~ sick up -> throw up / be sick @62 = ~So humans call the rise of the sun in the morn. Some venerate it in Lathander's name. Of old 'twas Amunator's following that-~ Amunator's -> Amaunator's @352 = ~Th-the rumors exaggerate... your size, sir. *blushes* Not that... size, I mean, they say you're eight feet tall. But I... I am very admiring of you, sir. Let me help you with your clothes. Quite... quite so. Wait till all the girls hear that I had the hero of the Sword Coast... and that he chose me over Marinda and Bhetel... and...~ I am very admiring of you -> I greatly admire you Marinda -> Madrina x#eldoth.tra: @38 = ~*sigh* And so the blackmailer trumps the poor, inoffensive confident trickster. I *really* should have listened to what my dear mother told me.~ confident -> confidence x#faint.tra: @33 = ~Dream? *she howls* What I am - a townling?~ I am -> am I @53 = ~Perhaps, that what it was, druid.~ that -> that's @83 = ~Always remember that because of you a wolf had died.~ had -> has @96 = ~Grrr! The drow’s scimitars are pretty and sharp, but the Emerald Ray scimitar is what I want. That’s the proper weapon for a druid. Did I tell you that it was forged from Kador’s the Burner sickle? Kador was a famous Shadow Druid... if only I had it!~ Kador’s the Burner sickle -> Kador the Burner's sickle x#faldorn.tra: @207 = ~That’s true. Weakling you might be, but you posses some sense. Maybe you shall tell me one day about your past.~ posses -> possess @215 = ~Dull-eyes, I think you need it more then me. Here, hold it.~ then -> than @234 = ~It’s good and wholesome. Like nature, and nature will not protest the heroic actions of its' champions and the songs that are sung about them! Minsc and Boo! Onward!~ its' -> its @261 = ~You are but a magpie in a gnome’s body! As if it’s not enough that you pester us trough the day with your chatter, you also mumbled all through the night!~ trough -> through @267 = ~*quickly* Say, Faldorn, what sheep do when they have trouble sleeping?~ what sheep -> what do sheep @279 = ~You are sooo mean, Faldorn. You did not let me to take a single one of those chicks. I have never seen any like that before...~ to take -> take @308 = ~Its ultimate harmony, Shar-Teel. Its the world where civilizations do not prey on the wilderness, its the world where every beast lives its life to its fullest and is guided by the hand of the Great Mother.~ -> It's ultimate harmony, Shar-Teel. It's the world where civilizations do not prey on the wilderness, it's the world where every beast lives its life to the fullest and is guided by the hand of the Great Mother. @343 = ~These wretched hovels, made from once-living trees ruthlessly cut to the ground, and stone, torn from the side of the mountain. Let the Oak Father grant me sufficient power, and I will erase this scab from the face of nature, and hunt it's inhabitants to extinction!~ it's -> its @362 = ~Insufferable wael! I do not know, I never sweated. Though, of course, should drow sweat, the smell of that would be sweeter than the terrifying concoctions humans pour on themselves to obscure the vile and sour stink that oozes from their pours.~ pours -> pores x#gaint.tra: @55 = ~Kozah was an ancient deity of desruction. We should be careful!~ desruction -> destruction @156 = ~Indeed! A veritable feast of vocabulary it may have been, while yet concise in it’s praise. But such is still pittance compared to the glitz, the glamour, the personality which flows impersonally from the heart of this small metropolis.~ it's -> its x#garri.tra: @28 = ~Bah! Never fails. Every time someone wants to 'help' me, they're either useless fools like yourself... Though you'd make a better specimen that most, if used fresh...~ they're either useless fools -> it's useless fools that -> than @72 = ~He is proving himself on his dejemma, young one, as he must.~ dejemma -> dajemma x#ict3.tra: @49 = ~ *whispering* I, err... I don't think is such a good idea...~ is -> it's @154 = ~Er... how long you are going to stay in this cave, anyway?~ you are -> are you @363 = ~We'd apprediate anything you can do for us.~ apprediate -> appreciate @438 = ~Always remember that because of you a wolf had died.~ had -> has @453 = ~Another fool freed. Oh, <CHARNAME>, what are hero you truly are.~ what are -> what a @602 = ~It is was the right choice not to ally with this evil creature, <CHARNAME>!~ It is was -> It was @612 = ~Fool! You are more mad even that Carsa! Death will fit you well! KAHRK!~ that -> than @623 = ~An ancient red will not burn us into a crisp, but we'd die of poison, instead. <CHARNAME>, have mercy on us, walk wide around this suicidal maniac... though then we risk forging this mighty stream. Under current weather conditions, it can only lead to influenza. Why, oh why did you choose this bridge?~ into a crisp -> to a crisp forging -> fording @635 = ~Grrr! The drow's scimitars are pretty and sharp, but the Emerald Ray scimitar is what I want. That's the proper weapon for a druid. Did I tell you that it was forged from Kador's the Burner sickle? Kador was a famous Shadow Druid... if only I had it!~ Kador's the Burner -> Kador the Burner's @686 = ~I was just thinking how refreshing it would be to kick some man in the groin. And break his skinny necks afterwards… Stop gawking, <CHARNAME>. There is coin to be made and fun to be had. On we go!~ necks -> neck x#imint.tra: @220 = ~*shrugging her shoulders and grinning* Well, we'll just have ta deal with 'em when it they come again, but this time, it'll be their bodies rottin' in the sun.~ when it they -> when they @376 = ~Looks like the old man gets his final rest now. But why would not they let me take a finger or toe for a... memento?~ not they -> they not x#imoen.tra: @130 = ~No way! Do not you understand that I am doing it on purpose? Let's go fight all those monsters my thunderous snoring had attracted!~ had -> has @243 = ~Wow. So did you're clan ever build something like this?~ you're -> your @263 = ~Well since this doesn't seem to be working exactly as I planned, I guess its okay, especially since you say you'll be a bit more cheerful.~ its -> it's @419 = ~What about the time ya did sneak out that wand the witch's pack and was trying to hide it?~ ya did sneak out -> ya snuck out wand the -> wand from the @445 = ~How can ya act so cruelly, Monatron? Aren't halflings s'pose ta be fun-loving thieves and adventurers or more homely types?~ Monatron -> Montaron s'pose -> s'posed @522 = ~Sorry, but we're on a tight budget, so its only the basics for us.~ its -> it's @575 = ~Oh, so you wanna continue? I'm sure I can find other deficiencies... lets look up the size of gnomish heads...~ lets -> let's @616 = ~There are plenty of pink stones, Imoen. Why, there are pink garnets, lals, the color of roses and pink vorobevstones, which I may say are just like m'lady's cheeks when she blushes... and pink topazes of course... some rubystones are pink and bright carnelian. My kin from Lantan trade corals sometimes, aside from the most peculiar sort of items.~ lals, the color of roses -> lals the color of roses vorobevstones -> vorobyevite stones rubystones -> ruby stones @639 = ~Really? That sucks. Well, I guess can always come up with a new idea. It'll take a while though.~ guess can -> guess I can @649 = ~I don't care how my clothing looks, just so long the cut is practical.~ so long the -> as long as the x#jaheira.tra: @4 = ~A noble sentiment, but the jackals won’t necessary share it in the meantime.~ necessary -> necessarily x#kagain.tra: @79 = ~Ach! Don’t play deefened on me. I seen ye twitch. If ye’ve no wish to answer, say as much like a man. ~ deefened -> deafened @96 = ~Ha! Got to admit, “Sir Lance-a-lot”, I always thought of the man-side as the as the buyer. Ne’er struck me afore as what we got could be sold, too.~ as the as the -> as the @111 = ~Sounds too practical for bookish fellers, that. and strange work it must of been too, seeing the skills ye both took away from the place.~ fellers, that. and -> fellers, that. And must of -> must've @183 = ~Bah! The rich don’t carry they true wealth in their purses. Ye wants to deal with repeat custom, after all. That means an organization implementing procedures regular-like.~ they -> their @188 = ~Tell me, nuncle, why d’ ye rattle on so? Makes ye seem rather an elf that any fellow of sense.~ d' ye -> d'ye that -> than @238 = ~Maybe I'll show you my magic sometime soon, dwarf~ dwarf -> dwarf. @240 = ~Why would you wish my blade, dwarf? Only I can wield it, or a heir of my own blood.~ a heir -> an heir x#kaqst.tra: @33 = ~Kagain's Quest Entar Silvershield's son was killed. I did not trust Kagain, so we parted ways, but I might take the pin back to his family, when we get to Baldurs Gate.~ Baldurs Gate -> Baldur's Gate @35 = ~Kagain's Quest Entar Silvershield's son was killed. We might take the pin back to his family, when we get to Baldurs Gate.~ Baldurs Gate -> Baldur's Gate @39 = ~'Twas headed from Beregost NorthEast towards Baldurs Gate. Told 'em to stay East of the main road.~ NorthEast -> Northeast Baldurs Gate -> Baldur's Gate @44 = ~Kagain's Quest Entar Silvershield's son was killed. I didn't like Kagain's attitude, so we parted ways, but I might take the pin back to the Silvershields when we get to Baldurs Gate.~ Baldurs Gate -> Baldur's Gate Link to comment
hook71 Posted September 29, 2012 Author Share Posted September 29, 2012 x#khalid.tra: @78 = ~I th-think that there is one thing in common between you and Jaheira, Faldorn. You both were separated from your parents v-very early in your life and have never seen the again. M-maybe if you share your pain, it will help you two to be f-friendlier to one another.~ the again -> them again @183 = ~Th-thats what I meant to t-tell you. You’re standing in a p-pile of fresh horse d-droppings.~ Th-thats -> Th-that's x#kiint.tra: @56 = ~Saesa omentien lle, Drizzt Do'Urden. Pleasure meeting you... I heard the talk of you among my kin, and I am glad that we met. I am Kivan of Shilmista. I have never expected to find a noble soul in one of your kin. I serve Shevarash, yet I would not blaspheme my faith by shaking hands with you, Drizzt Do’Urden. The true blood of Ilythiry runs strong in you, uncorrupted by Lolth's treachery. Even after 5000 years, the goodness still nests in the darkness.~ I heard the talk -> I have heard talk I have never expected -> I never expected Ilythiry -> Ilythiiry the goodness -> goodness x#kivan.tra: @392 = ~Shar Teel, do stop this folly. *Kivan throws his sword on the ground.* A practice fight is a practice fight, but you are trying to hurt me. Your sword has an edge, and I do not believe that you forgot it.~ @398 = ~You must have suffered much, Shar Teel, to become this bitter, but I am not kind enough to see beyond the rough façade and try to heal your soul. I pray that you meet someone who would.~ @400 = ~Say what you want, Shar Teel. I just do not care.~ Shar Teel -> Shar-Teel x#lp1rep.tra: @41 = ~<CHARNAME>, the man offers lies and deceipt in exchange for our good name. Do not humor him. Good deeds are their own rewards, as you know well. Come, let us seek after our fame the honorable way, by serving justice and righteousness.~ deceipt -> deceit seek after our fame -> seek our fame @45 = ~Jackals and hyeanas have more heart and less gossip than a Bard. We waste time with this cur.~ hyeanas -> hyenas @77 = ~Money spent on words aways pays for itself. (Not that these simians could understand the subtleties of masterful manipulation of public opinion).~ aways -> always @110 = ~A wise decision. How much more fearsome would like to become? A little, a modest amount, or to a dramatic extent?~ would like -> would you like @112 = ~A little would suffice~ suffice -> suffice. x#lp2rep.tra: @41 = ~<CHARNAME>, the man offers lies and deceipt in exchange for our good name. Do not humor him. Good deeds are their own rewards, as you know well. Come, let us seek after our fame the honorable way, by serving justice and righteousness.~ deceipt -> deceit seek after our fame -> seek our fame @45 = ~Jackals and hyeanas have more heart and less gossip than a Bard. We waste time with this cur.~ hyeanas -> hyenas @77 = ~Money spent on words aways pays for itself. (Not that these simians could understand the subtleties of masterful manipulation of public opinion).~ aways -> always @110 = ~A wise decision. How much more fearsome would like to become? A little, a modest amount, or to a dramatic extent?~ would like -> would you like @112 = ~A little would suffice~ suffice -> suffice. x#lp3rep.tra: @41 = ~<CHARNAME>, the man offers lies and deceipt in exchange for our good name. Do not humor him. Good deeds are their own rewards, as you know well. Come, let us seek after our fame the honorable way, by serving justice and righteousness.~ deceipt -> deceit seek after our fame -> seek our fame @45 = ~Jackals and hyeanas have more heart and less gossip than a Bard. We waste time with this cur.~ hyeanas -> hyenas @77 = ~Money spent on words aways pays for itself. (Not that these simians could understand the subtleties of masterful manipulation of public opinion).~ aways -> always @112 = ~A little would suffice~ suffice -> suffice. @130 = ~There're those that'll take some convincin' that you could be even more fearsome than they imagine, but I'm the man to do it. I'll need to be thorough, and that costs. For a <MANWOMAN> of your reputation, the price would be 1500 gold pieces.~ you -> ye your -> yer @147 = ~There're those that'll take some convincin' that you could be even more fearsome than they imagine, but I'm the man for the job. But I'll have to be thorough, and that costs. For a <MANWOMAN> of yer reputation, the price would be 3000 gold pieces.~ you -> ye @160 = ~There're those that'll take some convincin' that you could be even more fearsome than they imagine, but I'm the man for the job. But I'll have to be thorough, and that costs. For a <MANWOMAN> of yer reputation, the price would be 4000 gold pieces.~ you -> ye @163 = ~For a <MANWOMAN> of your reputation, I doubt even I could do much to make it worse. Nevertheless, I might be able to manage moderate damage, but it'd cost ye 7500 gold.~ your -> yer x#minsc.tra: @161 = ~Evil Red Wizard! Minsc and Boo will tell you why Thavians will never defeat Rashemi.~ Thavians -> Thayvians @162 = ~Oh. Exactly the type of mental exercise I required! (My irony is unrivaled, I confess...) Discussing politics with a hamster! (Better then discussing politics with its owner, however.) Speak on. Amuse me.~ then -> than @226 = ~Oh, in Rashemen they often have bears dance at the fair... Boo says it's no different, but I'd rather dance then be in a cage. If I see one, I am going to make them to free it in any case!~ then -> than make them to free it -> make them free it @246 = ~Ah, nothing can be as important than returning a smile on your face. Rashemi girls know how to rekindle the warrior's spirit in a man's heart! Besides brewing the best spirit-~ than returning a smile on your face -> as returning a smile to your face @263 = ~Minsc would never allow such a thing! Boo would very upset if he did! Mmm... say Montaron... can Minsc and Boo have some of that mushroom stew this evening?~ would very -> would be very @313 = ~Aye, alone, that's just the thing. See, there are two of Minsc and Boo, and only one Dynaheir to defend against foes. We need to take others under our protective wings... erm, that sounds wrong... protective paws! Boo needs his dejemma task set to him...~ dejemma -> dajemma x#npcwait.tra: @94 = ~They say fish can't talk,but it sure is more entertaining than flying pigs. Come, Montaron, our time will be better spent chatting with eels at the bottom of the sea.~ talk,but -> talk, but @105 = ~There still be a few interestin’ places left in Balgur's Gate. The Low Lantern is a cozy bordello disguised as a boat. Seek me out there. Yer won't be sorry.~ @107 = ~There still be a few interestin’ places in Balgur's Gate. The Low Lantern is a cozy bordello disguised as a boat. Seek us out there. Yer won't be sorry.~ Balgur's Gate -> Baldur's Gate Yer won't be sorry -> Ye won't be sorry x#pcinit_tmp.tra: @42 = ~[VICONIA 36] In the Underdark, you would be fodder for the Kuo Toa.~ [%tutu_var%VICON36] Kuo Toa -> Kuo-toa @51 = ~A drow will never bend, save to a Matron Mother, and a drow female will never break. My House exiled me, but that does not matter I stopped being one of them.~ matter I -> matter, as I @336 = ~Nay, it's when she makes a corpse out of a man, than it's really an improvement.~ than -> then @347 = ~Luckily lots of them join the Flaming Fist, so I can derive double pleasure: not only I teach a scumbag a lesson, I also slaughter another male pig.~ only I -> only do I @348 = ~One Chultian man-eater in Yesna's employ said that men tasted good when roasted with dill and hot peppers.~ Yesna's -> Ysena's @360 = ~Why is that then that men waste good gold on whores, when they can rape all they want while pillaging?~ that then -> it @436 = ~Silk? Yesna had an assassin who could strangle a person with wisps of silk. *She spits.* The coward was blood-shy, too.~ Yesna -> Ysena @559 = ~I said don't want this, <CHARNAME>, or are you too stupid to understand a simple statement?~ said don't -> said I don't @827 = ~[bRANWEN 27] Shar-Teel seems to have more spine that a lot of the men in this party.~ [%tutu_var%BRANW27] that -> than @1048 = ~*You bend easily, allowing her to slip off your back and to the ground. As she lies there cursing, you graciously offer her your arm, and she starts to snicker instead.* 'Tis true,<CHARNAME>. You can.~ true,<CHARNAME> -> true, <CHARNAME> @1275 = ~When asked about her past DYNAHEIR has very little to say. She is apparently from the far-eastern nation of Rashemen, and has come to the west with a bodyguard known as Minsc. Minsc is on his 'dejemma,' a rite of passage, and it appears that she may be involved in something similar. Of this, she will only state that great things are foretold for the Sword Coast. She seems very sure of herself, is possessed with an old-world sensibility, and is very demanding of her companions. She has expressed concerns about the sanity of her bodyguard, though she has an obvious respect for him and will not go far from his side.~ [X#BLANK] the west -> the West dejemma -> dajemma @1323 = ~The nation of Thesk had long benefited from the Golden Way - the trade rout from the East to the Sea of the Fallen Stars. But to its demise, the Horde used this route, to march into the heart of Faerun. Now, much of Thesk still lieth in ruin. Most of its people were sent fleeing to Impiltur by the advancing Horde.~ rout -> route @1331 = ~I am Dynaheir, a witch of Rasheman. I and my comrade Minsc have been sent by the Wychlaran to determine if the prophecies of Alaundo are true. We search for the spawn of Bhaal.~ Rasheman -> Rashemen @1380 = ~If thou regret talking of this thing to me, than 'twas a mistake.~ regret -> regret'st than -> then @2241 = ~When asked about his past, MINSC proudly announces that he is a berserker warrior from the nation of Rashemen in the utter east. He is currently undertaking his dejemma, a ritual journey to manhood, and is seeking adventure and glory in battle. It is also his honor to be the bodyguard of a young Wychalarn of Rashemen named Dynaheir, and if anyone tries to harm her he will beat sense into their heads until they reconsider. He is unsure as to why she has led them to the Sword Coast, but his loyalty is unquestioning. If he serves her well and distinguishes himself in battle he hopes to be accepted into the Ice Dragon berserker lodge upon return to their homeland. So far Minsc considers his most notable experience in the world abroad to be the acquisition of his animal companion 'Boo,' a creature that he claims is a miniature giant space hamster. Apparently such things do exist in the Realms, but Minsc has surely taken too many blows to the head. He seems a good-natured fellow, but is all too willing to indulge his berserker nature.~ [DUMMYSND] dejemma -> dajemma Wychalarn -> Wychlaran in battle he hopes -> in battle, he hopes upon return -> upon their return a creature that he claims is -> a creature which he claims to be @2424 = ~Indeed, just listen to my wisdom and instruction, and you will win a great deal of knowledge. I am a priest of Baervar Cloakshadow, and a great mage besides. I, ah... mastered sorcery so quickly that the narrow-minded commoners in my village made me leave as soon as I had come of age. They could not tolerate a youngster teaching them how to do things properly, you see...~ you will win -> you will gain Baervar -> Baravar in my village -> of my village @2579 = ~*His embrace is warm, and it is strangely familiar to feel another elven body, so slight and alike your own, against yours. As Xan presses you more tightly, stroking your shoulders and whispering comforting words in your ear, you sense a new emotion - the call of your elven blood, of the heritage that lay hidden for so long. Its pull is exhilarating and troubling in the same time, for you were raised by human and among humans, and yet is somehow comforting. As you slip from under Xan's palms, you cannot help but feel you have just paid a short visit to the mysterious home of your own people, whose blood flows freely in your veins - Tel'Quessir.*~ that lay hidden -> that has lain hidden in the same time -> at the same time by human -> by a human Tel'Quessir -> the Tel'Quessir @2584 = ~I would be more careful if I were you - your human friend, Ajantis, casts dark glances in your direction even now. It is best if you make you choices fast, <CHARNAME>.~ you choices -> your choice @2635 = ~*He motions you to sit down next to him, and starts to speak, slowly and deliberately, choosing every word with great care.* <CHARNAME>, this has not happened. You were playing a joke, and I could not resist the temptation. I will carry the memory to my grave, but it must never again come to be in the waking word. I will not survive your death, then, and I do not want you to be hurt by mine. ~ waking word -> waking world @2715 = ~*Instead of taking you into his arms, Xan gives your face a single look and sweeps you off your feet, leaving your backpack on the ground. Completely oblivious to the startled looks of your companions, he rocks you in his arms slightly, like he would a child, and does not seem to think about your impeding doom at all.*~ impeding -> impending @2736 = ~*Xan stops, allowing you to play with his soft, silky tresses, and regards you with a small smile.* I never suspected my hair was more important that our tasks and enemies. *sigh* I wish I had your view of things.~ that -> than @2738 = ~*Xan sourly stares at his reflection in a nearest puddle.* My thanks and great appreciation, <CHARNAME>. I always suspected that the list of my miseries was not complete.~ a -> the @2754 = ~*Xan's build is lithe and lean, but fragile, almost skinny, and for a moment, you cannot help feeling that your touch will break him in two. He is also slightly taller than you, and you have to raise your head to fully see the object of your work. A mass of his hair partly obscures the view, as well as the high collar of his cloak, and it takes some time to get these obstacles safely of the way.*~ safely of -> safely out of @2755 = ~*Soon, however, you are able to proceed with you task. From the moment your fingertips come to rest on his shoulders, he stands absolutely still, neither moving nor breathing, and the only result you may feel is the increasing heat of his skin.*~ you task -> your task you may feel -> you feel @3064 = ~Aye, it grieves me t' see the mines come t' ruin. Me kin is all dead now, but once, <PRO_GIRLBOY>, the Cloakwood Mine of Orothiars was a fare settlement. I meself were an apprentice smith till my seventieth year. Aye... we fought wyverns that even then nested in Cloakwood, and me valour were noticed by old Torgrim, priest of Alaghor. He took me in as an acolyte, and since I taught Calggedin's word eve' since and took over Torgrim's duties on his passing.~ Cloakwood Mine of Orothiars -> Cloakwood Mine of the Orothiars fare -> fair since I taught Calggedin's word eve' since -> I've taught Clangeddin's word e'er since @3076 = ~*You talk about the Coran's problems and hopes, in a friendly and kind manner, in hopes of making Coran confide in you.*~ the Coran's -> Coran's @3169 = ~What knowledge would you like from me? I could tell you about the beautiful forests of Tehir, or the many gorgeous damsels that have fallen for my charms. I have studied up on the wyverns that prey upon the area. They have wicked barbs upon their tails, which they use to poison their victims. They are cruel beasts that enjoy inflicting suffering upon their prey. I really have not much more to say.~ Tehir -> Tethir studied up on -> read up on @3177 = ~*You notice that Coran's gaze wonders from the dark sky towards you, and his sharp features become pensive. What is it that he saw that made him to do so? Or does your imagination play tricks on you?*~ wonders -> wanders that made him to do so -> that caused this @3238 = ~A woman's sigh is a precious thing, that should not be wasted. *kisses you lightly on her lips* Now, it is preserved. ~ thing, that should not -> thing that should not kisses you lightly on her lips -> kisses you lightly on the lips @3261 = ~*Coran's lips skim over your cheeks and lips, never stopping. Sometimes there is just a minutes difference between a kiss and the touch of his breath. It smells like life itself, sharp and sweet.* It is a pleasure to kiss you in the sunlight, in full view of the world.~ minutes -> minute @3356 = ~Ah, you have noticed how badly it's written, as well? It does not do you justice at all! Come now, love, let us re-write it! Hmm... hair color... that's so plain... what will be the best word?~ @3370 = ~Ah, you have noticed how badly it's written, as well? It does not do you justice at all! Come now, love, let us re-write it! Hmm... eye color... that's too plain... what will be the best word?~ re-write -> rewrite @3377 = ~Azure? Yes, let me pen it down: <CHARNAME> of Candlekeep with eyes of dark azure, that will remind you of the Dargonmare on a calm day. Much better now, is it not? ~ Dargonmare -> Dragonmere @3388 = ~There was as wizard once, who kept locking himself out of his own magical tower. One day he came back and found the doors open and a gnomish thief going through his belongings. He immediately cast a spell that held the poor sod in place. Faced with the prospect of losing his hand for thievery, the rogue agreed to serve the wizard for five years. So, the mage petrified him and set on his front lawn, and from time to time when he forgot his keys, he unpetrified the rogue to let him in the tower. They still argue how to count the five-year term of service, for the wizard insists on counting only the time when the rogue picks the locks, and the thief says that he works the rest of the time as a garden gnome.~ as wizard -> a wizard set on -> set him on let him in the tower -> let him into the tower @3421 = ~Oh, but I *did* means it this time, lover.~ means -> mean @3441 = ~*Coran laughs lightly* And how did you know I meant *yours* eyes, not someone else's? ~ yours -> your @3517 = ~My magic is the result of long, through and careful studying, a feat that few are able to accomplish. (Judging by <HISHER> appearance, <HESHE> never had a book in <HISHER> hands, let alone a spellbook.)~ through -> thorough studying -> study @3601 = ~Certainly. Would you prefer one about the deaths of kings? Or the deaths of princes? Or beautiful princesse, perhaps? Or might I suggest 'The Tragic Ballad of the Overweening Adventurer'? ~ princesse -> princesses @3831 = ~*You proceed with asking inquisitive questions about Ajantis's past.*~ @3833 = ~*You talk about Ajantis's problems and hopes, in a friendly and kind manner, in hopes of making Ajantis confide in you.*~ Ajantis's -> Ajantis' @3886 = ~I am exausted... We should take a small rest to gather our strength, <CHARNAME>.~ @3888 = ~I am tired, <CHARNAME>. It has been a long day, and we are exausted. Let us take a rest, and prepare for the next day.~ exausted -> exhausted @3925 = ~This is outrageous. We are treated like murderers! We have to proof the righteousness of our actions!~ proof -> prove @3940 = ~I belong to a noble family of Ilvastarr of Waterdeep. I joined the Order of the Radiant Heart as a squire and studied my swordsmanship under Mrymith Splendon himself! I am now on the road to fight battles with evil and quench this land of foul creatures we may cross. I hope that this way I may prove to the Order that I am deserving of becoming a full-fledged member!~ a noble family of Ilvastarr of Waterdeep -> a noble family, the Ilvastarrs of Waterdeep Mrymith -> Myrmith quench -> cleanse of foul creatures we may cross -> of any foul creatures we may come across @3944 = ~As I already told you, I am a squire knight. I am on a quest to earn my right to be a full fledged member of the Order of the Most Radiant Heart.~ Order of the Most Radiant Heart -> Order of the Radiant Heart @3949 = ~I studied my swordsmanship under Mrymith Splendon himself!~ Mrymith -> Myrmith @3968 = ~I am trying to gain enough glory and honor to get knighted by the Order of the Most Radiant Heart. This is my goal, and I am eagerly awaiting the day of its completion.~ Order of the Most Radiant Heart -> Order of the Radiant Heart Link to comment
hook71 Posted September 29, 2012 Author Share Posted September 29, 2012 x#rumor.tra: @37 = ~Sarevok? No, that can't be... Sarevok is the villan here... he... he's evil, he's a murderer! This... this is all wrong!~ villan -> villain x#safana.tra: @183 = ~Just thinking of a well-formed female nose, it's tremendous length extending a foot or more from the face, it's nostrils expanding, its sleek curvature... *eyes glaze over*~ (x2) it's -> its x#sharteel.tra: @195 = ~Bah! Fancy names do not make a sword’s edge sharper. Does it have a worthy enchantment? Is it forged of mithril? ~ mithril -> mithral @202 = ~Well, my singing skills are, uh, second to none. Can't argue with that! Plus I'm an excellent fighter, and my mage’s skills are coming along quickly. And I've got pretty light fingers when it comes to purses. I'd consider myself quite a useful addition to the party.~ mage's -> magic @207 = ~Perhaps. Whatever the case may be, I will not pretend to respect you, male. Even by the standards of your gender, you are a sniveling little worm. Watch your step careful.~ careful -> carefully @240 = ~Ends up the same, don’t it? More ways in the world t’ be gettin’ somethin’ then just bangin’ on the door 'n’ bellerin’ fer it.~ then -> than @283 = ~Nooooo! Eldoth... Oh, Eldoth! I... I should have helped him... but I thought he can... manage you, rabid beast. He... He always said that a woman should let a man do the fighting... *sniff*~ can -> could x#shint.tra: @119 = ~I was just thinking how refreshing it would be to kick some man in the groin. And break his skinny necks afterwards… Stop gawking, <CHARNAME>. There is coin to be made and fun to be had. On we go!~ necks -> neck x#shrom.tra: @192 = ~Maybe we should make a contact with her? She sounds like a prominent figure in Baldur's Gate underworld.~ make a contact -> make contact in Baldur's Gate underworld -> in the Baldur's Gate underworld @219 = ~How about we give another go to wrestling between the sheets?~ give another go to -> have another go at @422 = ~*in a cranky mocking voice* Yieees, Shar-teel?~ Shar-teel -> Shar-Teel @645 = ~The endlessness of our chase... how the goal always seems so close, yet continues to eludes me. And at how incredibly foolish I am to think that all of this really matters in the great scheme of things.~ eludes -> elude @692 = ~And the grub is not ready yet, so we can't go about snorting at <PLAYER2>'s cooking skills or lack of there of. Shar-Teel, maybe you could just sit closer to me, and we can stare at the fire in silence? It could be... er... different.~ or lack of there of -> or lack thereof @698 = ~Something in your tone makes me think this isn't exactly what your seeking.~ your -> you're @699 = ~This is so ridiculous. *Despite her words, Shar-Teel allows herself to slip into your arms. She lays her upon your shoulder... then dozes off.*~ her upon -> her head upon @702 = ~I have no clue. What is that you really want, Shar-Teel?~ is that -> is it that @772 = ~I see that your head is still too big for you. Ha! I’ll see to it that self-righteous swelling goes down. "I allow the party". Ha!~ "I allow the party" -> "I allowed the party" @899 = ~Well, that's it, lover-boy. Don't fret, I won't let your brother to gut you like a fish. That privilege is mine!~ brother to gut -> brother gut @932 = ~Shar-Tee, we sell every prize that we win, apart from gear that we can use. So put that back immediately... whatever it is that you took. Have the decency not to steal from your own companions.~ Shar-Tee -> Shar-Teel @936 = ~*She thrusts her hand at you, so quickly that she almost breaks your windpipe. Lucky for you that your reflexes are still in tact... You dodge the blow just in time.*~ in tact -> intact @943 = ~Shar-Teel, we sell every prize that we win, apart from gear that we canuse. So put that back immediately... whatever it is that you took. Have the decency not to steal from your companions.~ canuse -> can use @959 = ~Why are you making us to lug about this dead weight? Books won't fetch us more than a copper!~ us to lug -> us lug @1021 = ~You... you have picked this stinking weeds for your hussy! Don't bother to deny it, you, creep!~ weeds -> weed you, creep -> you creep @1048 = ~*Shar-Teel bits off a broken fingernail and spits it on the ground. It seems that it was purely accidental that she looked your way while er... grooming herself.*~ bits -> bites @1097 = ~*She balls her hands into fists.* I'm itching for a fight, lover-boy. And for a blood sausage. And- *She suddenly stops. It remains for you to guess what was it that she was thinking about.*~ was it -> it was @1115 = ~*She pokes you into your ribs.*~ into your ribs -> in the ribs x#skie.tra: @30, @34, @35, @36 When I was born -> Since I was born @37 when I was born -> since I was born @41 = ~You... you do not care about anyone, don't you? Not about Gorion, not about your friends who try to console you. At least I have Eldoth. He loves me, he's all I have now. ~ don't you -> do you your friends who try to console you -> the friends who try to console you @94 = ~Alora? How long have you been living in the Baldur's Gate?~ the Baldur's Gate -> Baldur's Gate @128 = ~There wasn't enough force behind the throw for the sword to piece my armor, and that's something else you can work on. Now, I'm going to pretend to attack you to test your defenses.~ piece -> pierce @169 = ~Clearly, I misspoke. (How very annoying when someone so inferior dares to correct my mist... misspoken words!) Away from me, simpleton, there is nothing I wish to discuss with you, as I am not inclined to stoop any lower than I have already had when I graced you with an answer.~ had -> done @209 = ~Oh, dear! I... never thought about adventurers’ being poor...~ adventurers’ -> adventurers x#tiax.tra: @99 = ~You think Tiax is a clown, here for your amusement!? Would you like Tiax to do a little dance and wear a funny costume, as well!? Why Cyric granted Tiax such disrespectful slaves, Tiax will never know, but he tires of this impudence! World conquest shall come soon, and then his slave's laughter will turns to tears upon the sacrificial altar!~ his slave's -> his slaves' turns -> turn @145 = ~Don't get too cocky, pointy-ear! You may have the advantage now, but when Tiax rules, his harem shall number in the tens of thousands, with all the most beautiful women of every race gathered in it's number! Then Tiax shall lock you in his dungeon for the remainder of your years, never again knowing the embrace of a beautiful woman, so that you will curse the day you did not bend knee to Tiax when you had the chance!~ gathered in it's number -> gathered together @176 = ~When Tiax rules, Tiax thinks this would be a great place for a statue, honoring his greatness! Standing three hundred feet into the air, covered in precious jewels, and forged of gold and mithril! 'Tis DESTINED! Oh, and maybe the rest of you will deserve a plaque a little down the road mentioning your contribution to Tiax's rule. A small plaque.~ mithril -> mithral will deserve -> deserve @185 = ~If its alright by you, Tiax, I think I'll pass for now.~ its -> it's @288 = ~Ahhhh, hair as white as the snow and soul as black as coal! The nose could have been larger, but... Cyric, and by connotation Tiax himself, would benefit from servants such as yourself! Why have you dedicated yourself to the false god Shar,when the Black Sun would welcome you into his service?~ as the snow -> as snow Shar,when -> Shar, when @293 = ~Not only that, but you would be allowed to sing the praises of Cyric's name, sacrifice the faithless to his glory, and eventually meet your end, fighting against his enemies! What greater reward could be asked for then to live and die in the name of Cyric and his greatest champion!?~ What greater reward could be asked for then to live and die in the name of Cyric and his greatest champion!? -> What greater reward could you ask for than to live and die in the name of Cyric and be his greatest champion!? x#tiaxquest.tra: @16 = ~well, obviously I am not getting through to you. I will go see if I can find a gnome and try this whole thing again.~ well -> Well @62 = ~I tire of this. I am going to kill you now. If I were you, would run.~ would run -> I would run @73 = ~My name is Belgin, known as Belgin the Wanderer, priest of Baervan Wildwanderer. This gnome that you know as 'Tiax' is actually named Telliax. He's the privileged son of an Athakatlan merchant, but his privilege landed him in a bit of trouble.~ Athakatlan -> Athkatlan @195 = ~Hail, Karris! My name is <CHARNAME>, recently of CandleKeep. I believe we may have an issue to discuss.~ CandleKeep -> Candlekeep @214 = ~A waste of time. The mageling is mine. (I will have to finish the rest of them off anyways - why do I suffer these incompetents?~ incompetents? -> incompetents?) @233 = ~Ooooh... no maore battles, please. Can't we just take the money and go?~ maore -> more @252 = ~Bounty Hunters Again I met the bounty hunters who were tracking Belgin, told them where Belgin was hiding out. I profited nicely from this deal! Belgin pays, the bounty hunters pay, and hopefully they'll hang Belgin before anyone in Amn can learn the truth.~ tracking Belgin, told them -> tracking Belgin and told them @254, @255, @256, @313 Karris's -> Karris' x#tiint.tra: @8 = ~My nose was just fine, until ye entered my favorite tavern and filled it's common room with yer stench. I know adventurer, when I smell it, for it has the reek of stupidity and lust for ill-gotten treasure. Now begone, for while yer stench is powerful, yer wit is weak, and I don't spar with children.~ it's -> its adventurer, when I smell it -> adventurer when I smell it x#totsc.tra: @15 = ~An interesting point, and one which bears more relevance to the situation that you know. Still, I would know your friend's answer to the original question.~ that -> than @71 = ~Gift? I would have called a gift, if you asked before bestowing it upon us. Wolves are proud and strong beasts, and there is no shame in having wolf-blood. By not giving us the choice, you had cursed us, Kaishas.~ called a gift -> called it a gift @103 = ~I find your ways at least as barbaric of the surfacers on the mainland. And I alone, coming from a place of true culture, am fit to judge.~ barbaric of -> barbaric as that of @2006 = ~Gift? I would have called a gift, if you asked before bestowing it upon us. Wolves are proud and strong beasts, and there is no shame in having wolf-blood. By not giving us the choice, you had cursed us, Kaishas.~ called a gift -> called it a gift if you asked -> if you had asked you had cursed us -> you have cursed us x#viconia.tra: @143 = ~Yeah! Ol' Puffguts ran the inn there. He was kinda like a father to me. You know, like Gorion was to <CHARNAME>~ <CHARNAME>~ -> <CHARNAME>.~ @171 = ~You have forsaken Lloth not for a kinder deity, Viconia. Your conversion means nothing to me. The day one trusts a Dark Elf is the day of one's demise.~ Lloth -> Lolth (matching @170) @235 = ~Feh! The dartiir is feebleminded, <CHARNAME>.~ dartiir -> darthiir x#viint.tra: @1 = ~Another fool freed. Oh, <CHARNAME>, what are hero you truly are.~ are hero -> a hero @33 = ~Bah... We have the might to do whatever we wish! For some reason we find ourselves helping these rivvil; yet still they throw accusations at us!~ rivvil -> rivvin Link to comment
hook71 Posted September 29, 2012 Author Share Posted September 29, 2012 x#xaint.tra: @59 = ~An ancient red will not burn us into a crisp, but we'd die of poison, instead. <CHARNAME>, have mercy on us, walk wide around this suicidal maniac... though then we risk forging this mighty stream. Under current weather conditions, it can only lead to influenza. Why, oh why did you choose this bridge?~ into a crisp -> to a crisp forging -> fording x#xan.tra: @92 = ~Is anything good ever happens in this world? A group of ragged mercenaries came to the Halfway Inn about fifty years ago. They brought back Erevain’s sword and diary. His... his body was found near Kuldahar path...~ Is anything good ever happens -> Is anything good that ever happens @179 = ~The mist is thickening. It reminds me the Greycloak Hills, where I dwelled before starting this ill-omened investigation. I wish we had at least one Walker of the Mists to guard our backs here.~ reminds me the -> reminds me of the @254 = ~Long eared, yet short minded. It’s the “when” and “whom” means in killing. If the action itself was of any significance, than even <CHARNAME> has <PRO_HISHER> claim to greatness for all these *xvarts* <PRO_HESHE> managed to defeat so bravely.~ long eared, yet short minded -> long-eared, yet short-minded means in killing -> which have meaning in killing than -> then @259 = ~I will gladly cede the honor of early death to you, even if that proves the quality of a person. Besides, you will only be comfortable with life after you die. I can never understand why do you bother with sticking about on the Material Plane, where everything is so adverse to your gentle physic and psyche.~ bother with -> bother physic -> physique @266 = ~Faldorn, talking to you is only marginally better than fighting alongside with you. May I ask you not to add to my sufferings? By Seldarine, the day is already as grim as they come...~ fighting alongside with you -> fighting alongside you @281 = ~Maybe you should pull yourself out of the warped fairy tale you seem to be living in, and take a nice long look at reality. People die, some in pain, others in peace. Its something you can not avoid. And then, you can watch your 'happiness', your 'glory', and your 'love' all go down the hole it came from.~ living in, and take -> living in and take Its -> It's can not -> cannot it came from -> they came from @347 = ~At times. That last lot, they coins were so clipped and sweated, a blind beggar wouldn’t hardly touch ‘em. That were feudal enough for they had naught else.~ they coins -> their coins feudal -> futile @360 = ~You are even worse at making compliments than this pirate Lord I met once. “Safana”, he would say, “your breasts are just like bloody sails full of wind...” But go on, what else did you discovered about me? Mayhap there is a pearl in this pile of fish guts.~ discovered -> discover @382 = ~I am starting to understand what my cousin Erevain Blacksheaf meant when he advised me about the School of Illusionists. “Fool others with your magic”, he said, “but above all other failures, be afraid of fooling yourself into believing into your own mind’s creations.”~ believing into -> believing in @390 = ~Lie? Waela rivvil, I have seen the likes of you crawl on their bellies, kissing the dust under Matron DeVir’s feet asking to end their suffering. Their pale hides were torn, and the entrails were drugging after them, as they asked for death.~ the entrails -> their entrails drugging -> dragging @397 = ~I have not yet been called as yet; nothing more, nothing less.~ not yet been -> not been x#xanlt.tra: @474 = ~Gotcha! No, of course not. What I am, mad or somethin'?~ I am -> am I @476 = ~This is a boon I dared not imagine. *after slipping a away* Thank you, <CHARNAME>.~ a away -> away @483 = ~I have something I want to tell you, but none of the words I know are right; as ever, I have is a pocketful of glass beads when I need diamonds.~ I have is a pocketful -> all I have is a pocketful @748 = ~I want to protect you. I would give anything to place you beyond the marble walls of Evereska, or green depths of Suldanesselar, though even these will eventually crumble. But neither queen Ellesime nor the Hill Council would allow a Bhaalspawn to enter their realms. You are doomed to remain a wanderer, much as you are today. *sigh* Well, that gives me a perfect opportunity to shield you with my body... or some such. Lead on, <CHARNAME>, I do not doubt an occasion will present itself.~ or green depths of Suldanesselar -> or the green depths of Suldanessellar @1300 = ~Oh? Shall we discuss it away from Minsc' ears, then?~ Minsc' -> Minsc's @1312 = ~Never mind, <CHARNAME>! My supreme intelligence has never failed me before, and it will not fail me again! I'll give you heaps and tones of advice, just you wait! And in the meantime, take Xan, here - my extraordinary intuition tells me that to hook him, you need no tips at all!~ tones -> tons @1424 = ~Do you envy me for my straight sight and beliefs, Xan? Why don't you just stop bothering, if live is unbearable, as you said yourself?~ live -> life @1486 = ~For now, I do not have seem to have a choice.~ have seem -> seem x#xanq.tra: @6 = ~Well, one of those days, Xan, you should explain me how David did it.~ those -> these explain me -> explain to me x#xqxan.tra: @112 = ~You see, Xan, it's all sorted itself out. We cannot impose our moral values onto a man from Calimshan. He abides by different laws, and he did not breach them. Why, I am sure he even has proper papers! Even if he did, Xan... it is not us who should deal out punishment to him. We can file a complaint next time we pass through Baldur’s Gate. They are surely *much* better equipped then us to deal with these... one... three... five... six heavily armed ferocious fighters.~ @130 = ~Xan... We cannot impose our moral values onto a man from Calimshan. He abides by different laws, and he did not breach them. Why, I am sure he even has proper papers! Even if he did, Xan... it is not us who should deal out punishment to him. We can file a complaint next time we pass through Baldur’s Gate. They are surely *much* better equipped then us to deal with these... one... three... six... nine heavily armed ferocious fighters and accomplished spellcasters.~ it is not us who -> it is not we who then -> than heavily armed ferocious -> heavily armed, ferocious x#xzar.tra: @201 = ~Heh. I remeber that time Xzar was gonna mernoperlize the market for gilded fish in Westgate. Painted 10,000 minnows yeller, stuck ‘em in tanks and stacked ‘em in a warehouse. Wanted 50 gold a pop, ‘cause he had that there mernoperly on ‘em.~ remeber -> remember x#xzdr3.tra: @2 = ~The iron shortage, you mullet! I have been trailing this person for days. Search <PRO_HIMHER> and you will find the glowing mithril ring, which signifies the leader of the society which is tampering with the iron supply.~ mithril -> mithral x#xzint.tra: @5 = ~Truly? Xzar has been more discrete that I had dared imagine. I am the Master of the Zhentarim upon the Sword Coast.~ discrete that -> discreet than @101 = ~Ecch! Seeing you again has blasted by manners. These are my serva... uh... colleagues in my task. <CHARNAME>, <PLAYER2>, <PLAYER3>, <PLAYER4>, <PLAYER5>, <PLAYER6>...~ by -> my @131 = ~Hear ye! Hear ye! The mad cleric of Cyric defiles nature! He turned living in the walking corpses and lives with them as they are his family! Fear him!~ He turned living in the walking corpses and lives with them as they are his family! -> He has turned the living into walking corpses and lives with them as if they are his family! @139 = ~Fool! You are more mad even that Carsa! Death will fit you well! KAHRK!~ more mad -> madder that -> than x#xzqu.tra: @21 = ~Well, a mithril ring would serve as a container to receive the magic of your... ugh... specimen. Unfortunately, I have no such thing is stock at the moment, myself. If you were to provide such an ideal container, then... let’s see... the scroll, my time... for... nine hundred... call it one thousand gold pieces, I could produce a magical ring to resist enchantments – maybe even cast a minor one – in four... make it five days. Are you interested?~ mithril -> mithral is stock -> in stock @32 = ~Well, a mithril ring would serve. Costs three... uh... four hundred to enchant it to contain the essence. With that and your... uh... component, I could create a ring that'd let you shrug off charms, for certain. Maybe even let you throw one back, if I'm undisturbed for the five days labor needed. Let's see... the scroll, my time, it'd cost nine... a thousand gold, altogether. What do you say?~ mithril -> mithral five days labor -> five days of labor @39 = ~No way. It's nowhere near worth, it and we've got better stuff already.~ worth, it and -> worth it, and @106 = ~My Precious! I thank you, officer, for your able, if half-witting, assistance in the recovery of my property. Come, Montaron! We shall away to pastures new."~ new." -> new. @114 = ~It's employment would be most apposite at this juncture, would it not?~ It's -> Its @143 = ~No... but you may have. That gaud... may I see it? Yes, mithril, I judge... I have seen them before. So useful if I... that is, *we*... should want to enchant anything.~ mithril -> mithral @174 = ~Dryad of Cloudpeaks I have angered a Dryad near the Cloudpeaks, and have been warned out of "her" wood. Xzar with his crazy ideas did not help any. Ah, well, it's of little concern. She also directed me to look into a wolf cave just to the south, where a treasure cache hidden.~ cache hidden -> cache is hidden x#yeint.tra: @98 = ~We'll just have to do what he must.~ he -> we x#yeslick.tra: @162 = ~From what I gather, missus Dynaheir, yer land, Rashemen? Yer land has fer its' soldiers an' warriors an' chiefs many stout-hearted men, worthy fighters like yer bodyguard over there - though I daresay they're not all... hamster people.~ its' -> its @175 = ~'In perfect shape', says ye? An' here's me thinkin' ye mages mess around wi' widdle o' bat an' tail o' rat an' suchlike ick. Dirty business is spellcastin', or so I've always' thought. Persn'ly I'm amazed ye keep yer girly red robe clean, wi' all the muck ye must have ta handle ta chuck them spells o' yers.~ always' -> always @300 = ~That's not what *I* heard... He was a bloodthirsty bucanneer, a terror upon the seas, and a name respected and feared by the pirates and the navies of the Sword Coast alike. Rather dashing... for a dwarf. As for his clan... quite frankly, if you had a brother like that, would you tell anyone? *whisper* Believe me, dear, if there's a secret family shame dragging you down, you can tell little me...~ bucanneer -> buccaneer @303 = ~Ye've got the heart fer battle, Shar-teel, but an empty soul, or so I see... have ye, eh, never considered givin' yer devotion ta a higher power?~ Shar-teel -> Shar-Teel Link to comment
Dakk Posted September 30, 2012 Share Posted September 30, 2012 Wow that's impressive! One thing: @65 = ~This shield has have been through many battle - and lost every one.~ battle -> battles Shouldn't "has" be removed? Making it "This shield have been through many battles - and lost every one". Link to comment
hook71 Posted September 30, 2012 Author Share Posted September 30, 2012 Wow that's impressive! One thing: @65 = ~This shield has have been through many battle - and lost every one.~ battle -> battles Shouldn't "has" be removed? Making it "This shield have been through many battles - and lost every one". Thanks! I think it should be "has" in this instance since it's singular. Editing my post above to make it easier to implement. I'm from Sweden so English isn't my native tongue but I hope at least a majority of the report is correct... Link to comment
Kaeloree Posted September 30, 2012 Share Posted September 30, 2012 Definitely 'has', yes. Link to comment
Nilfalasiel Posted September 30, 2012 Share Posted September 30, 2012 Adding to the already existing corrections: @392 = ~Coran presented you with these bunch and assured you that these flowers were given to him by the Twelve Months.~ these bunch and assured you that these flowers -> this bunch of flowers and assured you that they @480 This is your engagement ring Ajantis gave to you. The ring is Ilvastarr family treasure. It is ornamented in rather a plain way, with only a few elaborate decorations around a light-blue gem. -> This is your engagement ring that Ajantis gave to you. The ring is an Ilvastarr family treasure. It is ornamented in a rather plain way, with only a few elaborate decorations around a light-blue gem. This is your engagement ring Ajantis gave to you -> This is the engagement ring that Ajantis gave to you You don't need a possessive in cases like these. @111 = ~'Tis an old legend, <CHARNAME>. Some say a great battle and bold unravelled on that shore, and the pack of greater seawolves devoured a tribe of sahaugin, fish creatures. The werewolves succeeded in driving off the interlopers, but, in their own turn, were hunted and killed by my people. Others insist that a great warrior of some renown challenged the beasts' leader to a fight, and killed him in a fair battle, making the remaining wolves scatter.~ a great battle and bold unravelled This isn't necessarily wrong. It's an archaic usage, but it's not incorrect. the pack of greater seawolves -> a pack of greater seawolves @181 = ~Let us go, then, friend. You've relieved my heart of its deadly weights yet again, and I am most grateful. *winks* Methlinks that hour of inspecting your hammer is not far away.~ weights -> weight that hour -> the hour @0 = ~*You open your eyes. The dawn is nearing, but the sky above you is still dark, and dotted with a myriad of shining stars. The air is laden with sleepy calm. For a moment you lay, listening to the silence and wondering what had woken you... A strange foreboding... not one of foes coming from the darkness, or the restless dreams of late, but a feeling that something wonderful is afoot, and you would be a fool to sleep though it. On nights like this, the Magical Weave of Toril seems to be as tangible as your own body. Not a sound touches the forest canopy.*~ you lay -> you lie @49 = ~Are you trying to tell me that kissing a heiresses to the Lord of Murder is titillating?~ a heiresses -> an heiress @226 = ~*This night you dream of a carnival, wild fun, music and wine pouring out on the streets. Masked and dressed in bright finery, you dance in the crowd, and man after man vies for your attention, and merry kisses and laughter. One of your suitors looks taller and most tireless than the rest. It's to him that you send not-too-subtle glances from behind your feathered mask, the glances he eagerly returns. The night promises to be long, and the morning will find you feeling the familiar excitement of taking a new lover.*~ your attention, and merry kisses and laughter -> your attention, merry kisses and laughter the glances he eagerly returns -> glances he eagerly returns @189 = ~I prefer to stay off the roads all together. I do not want to walk in the tracks of the others.~ I don't know the context for this one. Does "others" refer to a specific group, or just "others" in general? If it's the latter, then it should be: in the tracks of the others -> in the tracks of others @288 = ~Were I a slave in Mulhorand, once a day I would catch a glimpse of your sandals while protrating myself on the marble floor at your feet, and I would be the happiest man in Mulhorand.~ The repetition of Mulhorand is a bit awkward. Maybe substitute "country" for the second instance of "Mulhorand"? So "I would be the happiest man in the country". @345 = ~*A plump serving wench giggles over something Coran is whispering to her. Her hoop earnings dangle, and she presses her palm to her abundant bosom. "You’ve always been such a kidder, Master Coran!" she exclaims, but eagerly settles herself on Coran’s lap. Coran wraps his arm around her waist, and an easy smile curves his lips. The elf shares a cup of wine with her, and licks a few spilled scarlet droplets from her skin. Suddenly he lifts his head and searches the common room with his gaze, frowning worriedly when he does not see you where he had last left you. Coran suddenly gets up, and with a charming grin and quiet words he slips a few coins down the maid’s bodice. Then he leaves, and the woman stares for a few moments after him, with a surprised expression on her face.*~ see you where he had last left you -> see you where he last left you No need for the "had". @1110 = ~Oh, cap it. Plenty of are base-borns raised high in human society. Why, even in your own Tethyr, there was a half-elven bastard Kymer who succeeded King Alemander II or some such.~ Plenty of are base-borns raised high -> Plenty of base-born rise high "Base-born" isn't a noun, so it wouldn't take the plural, not like "newborn". @1285 = ~That’s my girl! *Coran kisses you on your cheek first, than on your lips... and again...* Sweetling, do not you think that it’s long past time that we... erm... halted for rest?~ kisses you on your cheek first, than on your lips -> kisses you on the cheek first, then on the lips Link to comment
Nilfalasiel Posted September 30, 2012 Share Posted September 30, 2012 Continued: @201 = ~I know you are not a talkative type, but for Henali’s sake, how long you were intending to stay silent?! Until we met under her blankets?~ a talkative type -> the talkative type @215 = ~*Claps Ajantis on the shoulder.* But do not be discouraged, my friend. There are woman around who are not in love with me. That drow girl looks only on you, I swear.~ There are woman -> There are women @38 = ~It’s a topic I do not care to explore. Lets drop the topic until another time, Ajantis.~ Lets drop the topic -> Let's drop it Otherwise, there's a repetition of "topic". @78 = ~Besides, the story of Ilvastarr's crest is not a very glamorous one. Rather then being inspired by a heroic battle or tragic love story, it is simply an emblem, based on a mosaic by my great-grandfather. He refused to tread the warrior’s path, choosing instead to be an artist. His legacy was the wish for his family not to become conceited and arrogant of their own achievements.~ Ilvastarr's crest -> the Ilvastarr crest conceited and arrogant of -> conceited and arrogant about @179 = ~The Red Wizards of Thay hold the darkest secrets of the strongest magic! The weakest of our Zulkir could grind that pathetic Elminster of yours to dust with a flick of her finger. (I hold more power in my pinky then <PRO_HESHE> does in <PRO_HISHER> dry little brain, I am sure.)~ Are all Zulkir female? If they can be both genders, then it should be "their" instead of "her". @340 = ~*You keep your rebelious dinner down. There is a reason to why the songs call you the Hero of the Sword Coast!*~ to why -> why @398 = ~Of dear Barzenak? Why ever for? No. He tried to become a lich... didn't quite make it. They stuffed him, I as I heard it, and sat him in the hallway of his former home. The new owner claimed his effigy keeps the zombies up to their work.~ Why ever for -> Whyever @70 = ~My love... <CHARNAME>, is it really your wish to wear this strange belt, with it's... consequences? How should I call you now, is "my lady" still appropriate? This is confusing me to no end... If I may say so, I would prefer you get it removed as soon as possible.~ How should I call you now, is "my lady" still appropriate? -> How should I call you now? Is "my lady" still appropriate? @84 = ~But it is not yet set in stone *how* the things will come to pass. You destiny, your future can be different, depending on what you chose. I have to know how you will decide!~ the things -> things chose -> choose how you will decide -> what you will decide @491 = ~Well, thinking about it, I had little contact with the kids of my own age except for Imoen. But there were nice people around: Dreppin, the stable master, Fuller, the commander of Candlekeep Guard, and Hull, one of the guards. Then there was Phylidia, the mage whose absent-mindedness was well known, and of course Winthrop, the jolly innkeeper.~ @498 = ~As you wish. Thinking about it, I had little contact with kids my own age, except for Imoen. But there were nice people around: Dreppin, the stable master, Fuller, the commander of Candlekeep Guard, and Hull, one of the guards. Then there was Phylidia, the mage whose absent-mindedness was well known, and of course Winthrop, the jolly innkeeper.~ "Kids" is a very contemporary word. I'd suggest using "children" instead. @728 = ~I can imagine that for a son of a noble family,, it is very important to have a wife who thrives in her role as a mother and the lady of the house. A woman for whom representing her family matters more than having a life of her own.~ her role as a mother and the lady of the house -> her role as a mother and lady of the house @120 = ~*Ajantis' winces slightly at your touch, although waiting motionless until you have finished.*~ @121 = ~*Ajantis' frowns at your touch, although waiting motionless until you have finished.*~ although waiting -> but waits Link to comment
Nilfalasiel Posted September 30, 2012 Share Posted September 30, 2012 Continued again: @32 = ~Some of us just 'aint cut out for the life. No shame in, though.~ 'ain't -> ain't @258 = ~If I give ye mouth to mouth, you'd be sure to get hammered from the all the ale I drank the night before.~ the night before -> last night @44 = ~After the elf has heroically slain the foul orc, there is only one thing left for him to do. He will die in sad reverie about his kin’s glorious past and amind regrets of his inability to prevent thier inevitable demise. Then a dwarf will come by and will try to bury him, but, while digging his grave, he is as like as not to find a vein of mithril. So he’d use the tree to smelt the metal and he will have no time among his labors to worry about the elven corpse... And that is why elves dislike the dwarves.~ amind -> amid thier inevitable -> their inevitable will come by and will try -> will come by and try he'd use -> he'll use elves dislike the dwarves -> elves dislike dwarves / the elves dislike the dwarves @57 = ~Who is not? Relax, <charname>, I do allow that an orc could be a noble exception to his race and that an elf could kill a tree for some dark purpose, and I can even imagine a generous dwarf, adventurous halfling,or a human who did not lust for the things others have...~ who did not lust -> who does not lust @172 = ~Oh, that’s when that wizard caught you with his wife and you had to flee the Gate?~ that's Not necessarily wrong. "That's" could stand for "that is" or "that was". @276 = ~*giggles* How’d you know that? Do you come up to a person and ask if he can afford to be robbed? Or do you leave a message in a house you have just picked clean with your address, so they can reach you in case if they’d want stuff back?~ in case if they’d -> in case they @373 = ~With somethin', I suppose. 'twas pretty messy when I left. This rich feller comes by with a sack o' coin fer the preacher. His sins were plugging him or some such rot, so the idiot decides to give in hopes o' gettin' unplugged. Alla same, he were a sight more liberal in his givin' then he meant, I'd wager. Preacher, too. Between 'em, they givin' cured me o' poverty fer quite a time.~ they givin' -> their givin' @430 = ~BAH!!! Foolish slave, power is the sixth sense for one *born* to rule! Tiax shall be waited on hand and foot by comely slaves! Tiax's armies shall lay waste to the land, and erect mighty statues in his honor! Tiax shall build a palace which, on it's own, shall make the mightiest human cities look paltry in comparison! All shall hail Tiax as lord and master, and only then shall he be pleased!~ to the land, and erect mighty statues -> to the land and erect mighty statues @208 = ~Amelia We have encountered a maiden, apparently betrothed to a thief, who is hiding from her in the Firewine Bridge ruins. Apparently, Amelia cannot enter the ruins, but she cannot depart the area, either, until giving her fiancé a "yes" or "no" response - in the form of white and red roses, respectively. We agreed to restore to life a bunch of withered roses for he,r and give it to this wretch Natan. According to Amelia, it will set her free her from her vow.~ a thief, who -> a thief who @235 = ~Minsc, it might be well afore I would return back to Rashemen. Dost thou wish to go home sooner, thou needest only tell me. Thy dejemma is all but fulfilled now.~ Dost thou wish -> Should thou wish @84 = ~I have read a manuscript, but it strikes me,that thou art of a nation that descends from Raumvira, and therefore thine account wilt be filled with liveliness, which I failed to find in the scroll.~ thine account -> thy account @319 = ~I am ashamed to admit that the only one I recall is anecdotal, Hathran. Year 1263 - The Year of Tressym... "In the town of the moon, Birds for Lady shalt croon... " I recall it whispered that Lady Alustriel simply shrugged, pointing out that Alaundo's prophesies are about as widespread as the tressym that year... who indeed roosted on the rooftops of Silverymoon for a tenday.~ @334 = ~I am ashamed to admit that the only one I recall is anecotal, Hathran. Year 1263 - The Year of Tressym... "In the town of the moon, Birds for Lady shalt croon... " I recall it whispered that Lady Alustriel simply shrugged, pointing out that Alaundo's prophesies are about as widespread as the tressym that year... who indeed roosted on the rooftops of Silverymoon for a tenday.~ anecotal -> anecdotal @394 = ~More? Than thou will have to wait until I take a breath in... I will need to hold it for the revelation.~ @397 = ~More? Than you will have to wait until I take a breath in... I'll hold it for the revelation.~ take a breath in -> take a breath @446 = ~Let me guess - that caused flooding, and the Thay armies tried to march in ,while the Hathran were distracted with repairing damages.~ Thay armies -> Thayvian armies march in ,while the Hathran were distracted with repairing damages -> march in, while the Hathran were distracted with repairing the damage @564 = ~I doubt not that thou can follow this path as sturdily as any other. *takes your hand and traces the lines on your palm thoughtfully* There waits for thee a true love... love that is stronger than grief, that is coming out of troubles and pain purer and brighter - like a mithril blade comes out of the heat and soot of a dwarven forge.~ thou can -> thou canst This depends on how consistent you want to be with Dynaheir's archaisms. But since there are instances of "thou art" being used, then other verbs should have the same treatment when paired with "thou". @599 = ~This journey was shorter than my first one. I rode down the Golden Way to the port of Telfamar in Thesk, and sailed to Saerloon. And there, after studying with a friend of mine in the Temple of Mystra, I bought passage across the Dargonmere to Westgate.~ Thesk, and sailed -> Thesk and sailed @1841 = ~I know. Loyalty and duty art qualities that he neither posses himself, nor strives to cultivate in his followers. He even rejected the woman who sincerely loves him. That is why I believe that thee, not Sarevok, will win in the end.~ posses -> possesses sincerely loves -> sincerely loved thee -> thou Link to comment
Nilfalasiel Posted September 30, 2012 Share Posted September 30, 2012 And some more: @29 = ~I disapprove of allowing jalulks to priesthood, but I suppose he is a good compliment to your witless warder.~ compliment -> complement @58 = ~Splattering blood... eek... I hate that myself. It's something I didn't quite expect... Eldoth never told me anything about it... Or about the... uhm... smell when bodies become bloated in the sun... Erm... excuse me, Dynaheir, but I... I think I'm going to sick up...~ sick up -> throw up / be sick @352 = ~Th-the rumors exaggerate... your size, sir. *blushes* Not that... size, I mean, they say you're eight feet tall. But I... I am very admiring of you, sir. Let me help you with your clothes. Quite... quite so. Wait till all the girls hear that I had the hero of the Sword Coast... and that he chose me over Marinda and Bhetel... and...~ I am very admiring of you -> I greatly admire you @308 = ~Its ultimate harmony, Shar-Teel. Its the world where civilizations do not prey on the wilderness, its the world where every beast lives its life to its fullest and is guided by the hand of the Great Mother.~ -> It's ultimate harmony, Shar-Teel. It's the world where civilizations do not prey on the wilderness, it's the world where every beast lives its life to its fullest and is guided by the hand of the Great Mother its life to its fullest -> its life to the fullest Not a mistake, but less repetition. @28 = ~Bah! Never fails. Every time someone wants to 'help' me, they're either useless fools like yourself... Though you'd make a better specimen that most, if used fresh...~ they're either useless fools -> it's useless fools @419 = ~What about the time ya did sneak out that wand the witch's pack and was trying to hide it?~ ya did sneak out -> ya snuck out @445 = ~How can ya act so cruelly, Monatron? Aren't halflings s'pose ta be fun-loving thieves and adventurers or more homely types?~ s'pose -> s'posed @616 = ~There are plenty of pink stones, Imoen. Why, there are pink garnets, lals, the color of roses and pink vorobevstones, which I may say are just like m'lady's cheeks when she blushes... and pink topazes of course... some rubystones are pink and bright carnelian. My kin from Lantan trade corals sometimes, aside from the most peculiar sort of items.~ lals, the color of roses -> lals the color of roses rubystones -> ruby stones / rubies There should probably also be consistency as far as American or British spelling is concerned. I've seen "armour" used in some of the earlier quotes, but here, you have "color". I don't know which spelling takes priority, but either make it "armour" and "colour" (and everything else that takes a "u"), or "armor" and "color". @649 = ~I don't care how my clothing looks, just so long the cut is practical.~ so long the -> as long as the @111 = ~Sounds too practical for bookish fellers, that. and strange work it must of been too, seeing the skills ye both took away from the place.~ fellers, that. and -> fellers, that. And must of -> must have / must've @188 = ~Tell me, nuncle, why d’ ye rattle on so? Makes ye seem rather an elf that any fellow of sense.~ d' ye -> d'ye Link to comment
Dakk Posted September 30, 2012 Share Posted September 30, 2012 Wow that's impressive! One thing: @65 = ~This shield has have been through many battle - and lost every one.~ battle -> battles Shouldn't "has" be removed? Making it "This shield have been through many battles - and lost every one". Thanks! I think it should be "has" in this instance since it's singular. Editing my post above to make it easier to implement. I'm from Sweden so English isn't my native tongue but I hope at least a majority of the report is correct... Yes of course it's "have" that's supposed to go. Thanks. Semi-drunken proofreading in the middle of the night (I'm also in Sweden, so as you can see the time was 05:26:)) makes for stupid mistakes @398 = ~Of dear Barzenak? Why ever for? No. He tried to become a lich... didn't quite make it. They stuffed him' date=' I as I heard it, and sat him in the hallway of his former home. The new owner claimed his effigy keeps the zombies up to their work.~ Why ever for -> Whyever[/quote'] Wyhever is not a real word. "Why ever for" should IMO stay. Link to comment
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