This appears to be the place to report typos. Since a rather long list is incoming, I feel I must offer some reassurance. Take heart, Berelinde, EVERYONE makes typos! And part of my job description is text revision, so I suppose that makes me particularly attentive. (Merciless according to my coworkers.) And I love Gavin! It's all to make him EVEN better than he already is!
In the "Let's knock boots" drunken flirt: "Gavin's answer IF somewhere..." has "if" rather than "is"
In the morning talk in which Gavin apologizes for it, I noted that it misses a "to" somewhere, but I apparently did not note a specific sentence... Sorry!
In one of the foot massage flirts: "...relaxing.Eventually..." misses a space after the dot.
In one of his flirts (sorry, forgot to note which one...): "...Gavin SIEZES your hand..." should be "seize", I think?
In the talk where he explains about Lanie: "...the love of (A) child does not..." misses the "a", I think, not sure?
In Reed's talk, you spelled "Anway" rather than "Anyway" somewhere.
One of <CHARNAME>'s responses the morning after the engagement: "You('VE) been hinting..." misses the "have"
In the talk where he says he is jealous: "that my debt to Lanie THAT goes beyond..." with one too many "that"
When meeting one of Gavin's neighbours: "I's been years..." has "I" rather than "It"
In the talk after the mess in the inn: "...to GLIMSE it" has "glimse" rather than "glimpse"
In one of Ajantis' warnings to Gavin, you spelled "repsonsibilities"
In the "something warm lying next to you" talk - may I suggest changing it for "someone" warm, maybe at least for those who accepted to sleep in Gavin's arms? I would surmise those PCs would expect him to be there the next morning and would suppose the warmth to come from someone rather than something? Anyway, here goes: "Anyway, worrying about it is (NOT) going to help..." misses the "not"
In the "have you ever known the touch of a man" talk: "...some understanding (OF) my need..." misses the "of", I think, not sure?
In one of the "will you stay with me once this is over" flirts: "I'm not going ANYWHWERE..." I think I must have read this one four or five times before I actually saw the surnumerary "w"
In one particularly cruel possible <CHARNAME>'s response the morning after you sleep with Gavin, if you rebuked his advances: "I kept worrying that you would ASSUALT me..." Honestly! How can anyone think that of the sweetest man in the world?
Do you want to hear something silly? I've recruited Gavin straight at the start, and explored a lot of wilderness, so now that I began Cloakwood, I had all his pre-heritage-revealing lovetalks. So I thought maybe I could dump him, dally about with Coran for a while, then take Gavin back before heading back to Candlekeep. But everyone's favourite cleric is so darn sweet that, everytime I PID him to terminate the relationship, his smile as I approach make me feel so guilty that I end up hugging him or telling him I love him.
Good work, Berelinde. Good work.