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#1 KIrving

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Posted 23 October 2009 - 04:04 PM

Not sure if I should put this here or in the public forum but anyway just noticed some typos in the new Interjections.

// Disappointed by Firkraag

INTERJECT FIRKRA01 5 GI#TF.Firkraag
== G#TYRISJ IF ~InParty("G#Tyris")
!StateCheck("G#Tyris",CD_STATE_NOTVALID)~ THEN ~A creature such yourself lowers itself to petty revenge? You are not worthy of my reverence, only my pitty.~

"such as yourself" and "pity"

// Meeting Adalon, the Silver Dragon

INTERJECT UDSILVER 0 GI#TF.MeetingAdalon
== G#TYRISJ IF ~InParty("G#Tyris")
!StateCheck("G#Tyris",CD_STATE_NOTVALID)~ THEN ~My lady, it is honour to be in your presence.~

"is an honour"


Also are there any other additions to proof read besides the Interjections in that file?
"We went out to play for the evening
wanted to hold on to the feeling
of the stretch in the sun,
and our breathlessness as we run
to the beach endlessly,
as the sun creeps up on the sea." Lille Lisa Hannigan

#2 Grim Squeaker

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Posted 24 October 2009 - 03:10 AM

Thanks, KIrving! I'll move this to the public forum in case any one else spots anything.

I knew I should have proofed those extra interjections...

"Leave me be, I don't want to argue.
I just get confused and I come all undone.
If I agree, well it's just to appease you,
'Cause I don't remember what we're fighting for."


#3 Grim Squeaker

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Posted 04 November 2009 - 12:37 PM

A fully voiced version 3 should be out in the next few days. So now's the opportunity for any little fixes. Does anyone have anything to report (no matter how minor)?

"Leave me be, I don't want to argue.
I just get confused and I come all undone.
If I agree, well it's just to appease you,
'Cause I don't remember what we're fighting for."





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