Typos for version 1(formerly: Talak)

[Kitanna]

First let me say, WOW! You all did a great job with this mod

There is a small typo in the sex scene with Talak. Choose Yes. Show

me what you can do. ..........his over hand moves down your torso.)

 

should be other instead of over, yes?

[Kulyok]

Yes, thank you!

[Kitanna]

Got another one for you. Just noticed since I decided to play a

fighter/mage. Teo's final dialog in the sphere. "I shall think of you fondly,

though I do not think we shall met again"

[KIrving]

Just noticed a couple of typos in Eldoth's dialogue,

 

(post sleeping with and when asking for renumeration)

PC response- I do not have this much.

Eldoth - Yes, yes, I as I expected. But if you just stop being boorish and see the benefits...and consequences, I am sure you will agree that settling the matter peacefully is in our all best interests.

 

-extra I.

-second typo, words around wrong way, should be all our.

[Kulyok]

Cool, thank you!

[KIrving]

a typo in Sir Bjornin's dialogue,

 

(after proposing/agreeing to give massage and also stating that he wasn't so old)

Sir Bjornin - I thank you. Yes I would appreciate this very much. Let us go somewhere a bit more private. I don't need the others ask why I haven't sort the aid of a healer again.(etc.)

 

to ask or asking here?

[Kulyok]

*thinks about renaming the thread*

 

*stops thinking*

 

I think the correct form would be "need the others to ask", but I'd rather wait for an expert to come along. Opinions, you are welcome.

[jastey]

There is at least one (other) native speaker who proposed "asking", and I actually thought it got changed for v.1.

[Kulyok]

I suspect it went like this: either the proposed change didn't make it to me, or, more likely, it did, but since you sent me a new version of the component to me to replace(*grr* to whole-component-replacements, I say), replace it I did, but that change got lost.

[jastey]

Then I most probably forgot it. My apologies. I would be grateful if you'd change it, then.

[Kulyok]

Got it. Will add "asking" into the list of changes.

[Rabain]

Also the word sort in that Bjornin dialogue should be sought, no?

 

I'm not sure of the context but the word "again" at the end could also be replaced by "before" or "already"

 

Sir Bjornin - I thank you. Yes I would appreciate this very much. Let us go somewhere a bit more private. I don't need the others asking why I haven't sought the aid of a healer "already/before now".

[berelinde]

"sought" is right. Missed that one.

 

But "again" works, because he was banged up when you met him in BG1. But no strong opinions.

[Kulyok]

Yes, of course - will add 'sought'. A shame on me for having missed it, though being deeply absorbed in Gaiman's 'Stardust' may count as an excuse.

[KIrving]

*shakes head* I can't believe I typed it out (word for word), previewed it and didn't even register that error. (Not enough sleep, I think.)