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#1 jastey

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Posted 22 January 2018 - 04:38 AM

Version 13 had a little change in the order of events: Aster will tell now what she expects from the PC before her path has to be accepted.

 

For this, v13 comes with these new lines that are currently still in English (and German).

 

Translations still needed are: Russian, French, Simplified Chinese.

 

@918  = ~Before I commit to giving you more information, I must have your pledge of secrecy.~
@919  = ~Very well. Pay the 15,000 gold coins to seal our agreement.~
@920  = ~If you agree to defeat the Shadow Thieves, you will find the second task to serve an even greater good.~

 


Edited by jastey, 26 January 2018 - 10:02 AM.


#2 Gwendolyne

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Posted 22 January 2018 - 06:33 AM

Dis you asked the official French translator?


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#3 jastey

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Posted 22 January 2018 - 06:49 AM

This post is my only call for translators. As far as I understood, Isaya is coordinating the French translations now, but I had no luck with a PM regarding another project, so I didn't want to pester via PM again.

 

Note: One of the lines in the first post was edited. I found a hole* in my design, so I moved the dialogue lines a bit. The new version will be released soon.

 

*Nothing game-breaking, but the PC could agree to Aster's route verbally before paying the gold - which will be the official moment where the other paths will shut down.



#4 Gwendolyne

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Posted 22 January 2018 - 07:03 AM

OK. I checked and the former translator Galathée has retired from the translation pool (I recently translated a few new lines for a Salk's mod she translated many years ago).

 

Tonight, I will join Isaya and, if there is no problem, I will translate your lines. ;)


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#5 jastey

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Posted 22 January 2018 - 07:18 AM

Cool! Thank you in advance.



#6 Gwendolyne

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Posted 23 January 2018 - 08:30 PM

Done:

 

@918  = ~Avant que je ne m'engage à vous donner plus d'informations, vous devez me promettre de garder le secret.~
@919  = ~Très bien. Réglez-moi les 15 000 pièces d'or pour sceller notre accord.~
@920  = ~Si vous acceptez de vaincre les Voleurs de l'Ombre, vous trouverez que votre deuxième mission sera accomplie au service d'un bien encore plus grand.~

The last line was a little tricky to translate because it does not sound very "fluent" in French. I had to find a way to express its meanings with another wording.


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#7 jastey

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Posted 23 January 2018 - 11:30 PM

Thank you very much! Another wording is perfect if it makes the sentence better in French.



#8 jastey

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Posted 26 January 2018 - 01:02 AM

Thank you c4_angel for the lines in Simplified Chinese! Version 13.1 with the two completed languages is up.

 

Only Russian still missing.



#9 Gwendolyne

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Posted 26 January 2018 - 01:38 AM

Sorry to use this threat for an off topic question, but

 

Changes:

  • Rearranged Aster's path: the PC can now ask about the tasks before agreeing to do them.
  • new lines in French added, by Gwendolyne
  • fixes and refinements plus translation for new lines for Simplefied Chinese version, by c4_angel
  • Installer updated to WeiDU v240.

 

I am curious to know if you had a serious reason (I mean in terms of modding) not using the latest version (243)? And which one, if yes?


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#10 jastey

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Posted 26 January 2018 - 01:49 AM

Thank you for pointing that out.

The good thing: This is a copy and paste error.

 

The bad thing: I updated to weidu 242, because I completely missed the release of v243 (up until I posted the announcement of v13.1).

 

I will update to v243 when integrating the Russian lines (I'd still need *nudge* *wink*)


Edited by jastey, 26 January 2018 - 01:51 AM.


#11 Creepin

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Posted 26 January 2018 - 03:55 AM

@918  = ~Прежде, чем я соглашусь раскрыть вам больше информации, поручитесь, что сохраните её в тайне.~
@919  = ~Отлично. Заплатите 15,000 золотых, чтобы скрепить сделку.~

 

I'd be happy to help with @920 as well but I'll be damned if I have any idea how they called Shadow Thieves in a Russian translation :(

 

EDIT: googled a bit and it seems like I've found Shadow Thieves Russian translation, not 100% sure it's most widespread one though. Anyway:

@920  = ~Если вы согласитесь одолеть Теневых Воров, вас будет ждать второе задание, которое принесёт ещё больше добра.~


Edited by Creepin, 26 January 2018 - 04:52 AM.


#12 jastey

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Posted 26 January 2018 - 04:38 AM

This is great! Alas, copying the lines at my computer does not work, so I'd be really happy if you could send me the lines per email to jastey at web.de! Maybe even the whole "DIALOGUE.TRA".



#13 jastey

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Posted 26 January 2018 - 10:03 AM

All languages are complete and version 13.2 is up. Thanks again for translating!





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