Mike1072 Posted September 29, 2008 Share Posted September 29, 2008 Please report any typos you find here. Link to comment
Demivrgvs Posted October 5, 2008 Share Posted October 5, 2008 A small typo may mislead Plate of Balduran's users, its description currently says it regenerates 3hp/round, which is way overpowered. It's actual in-game regeneration rate is 3hp/turn. Link to comment
Raj Posted October 30, 2008 Share Posted October 30, 2008 Bracers of blinding strike: it's written they are not usable by kensai, yet they are. Link to comment
lac Posted November 3, 2008 Share Posted November 3, 2008 Spider's Boots of Stealth most successful burglar --> most successful burglars his boot and cloak --> his boots and cloak was rife whether --> was rife as to whether it was know he had --> it was known that he had I also think if would read better if instead of "Still those in the guild" became "Still many in the guild" or "still some in the guild" or even "still the guild". I would also capitalise "Guild" throughout. Link to comment
Mike1072 Posted November 3, 2008 Author Share Posted November 3, 2008 Spider's Boots of Stealth most successful burglar --> most successful burglars his boot and cloak --> his boots and cloak was rife whether --> was rife as to whether it was know he had --> it was known that he had I also think if would read better if instead of "Still those in the guild" became "Still many in the guild" or "still some in the guild" or even "still the guild". I would also capitalise "Guild" throughout. Thanks! I've changed most of those and some other things. I don't think 'guild' needs capitalizing in this case. Spider's Legs'Spider' was the nickname of an infamous half-elf thief who frequented the city of Athkatla. No one knew his real name, origin, or anything else about him, which was precisely the way the thief wanted it. Spider was a loner, never forming close relationships with the other Shadow Thief guild members. There could be no doubt that he was one of the finest and most successful burglars in living memory, and his loyalty to the guild was never in question. Still, many in the guild considered him a malevolent menace. He was openly, undeniably evil. That fact, and his appearance and dress, led to rumors that he worshipped Lolth, the Spider Queen. Spider was obsessed with his alias and nickname, and very flamboyant when on a caper. His face was tattooed in a web pattern, and much of his clothing was embroidered with similar motifs. His boots and cloak were known to be enchanted, and speculation was rife as to whether the items he supposedly found in his travels had subsequently shaped his personality and tastes. It was known that he had at least three additional pairs of the enchanted boots made so that one pair would always be clean. Link to comment
Demivrgvs Posted November 3, 2008 Share Posted November 3, 2008 Bracers of blinding strike: it's written they are not usable by kensai, yet they are.Just so you know, I may not reply to all posts but I do look at all of them. Replying to all typo reports would probably make this topic unnecessary too long, but I fix typos as soon as you players post them. Same goes for your reports about Sword of Roses and Nature's Vengeance Iac. Link to comment
Guest D. U. Bertie Posted November 3, 2008 Share Posted November 3, 2008 I wonder if that should say "His face was tattooed with a web pattern" rather than "...in a web pattern". I don't know. It just sounds a bit odd to me as it's currently written. Link to comment
lac Posted November 4, 2008 Share Posted November 4, 2008 Light Tower Shield +2 and fighting results more difficult --> and fighting becomes more difficult Except that this addition is in conflict with the rest of the description. The Light Tower shield is first praised for being light and powerfully protective, and then damned for its encumbrance. Which is it? Link to comment
lac Posted November 4, 2008 Share Posted November 4, 2008 Celestial Fury arc of lightning leap -> an arc of lightning leaps save vs. breath half -> save vs. breath for half 5% chance of dealing 20 additional electrical damage -> 5% chance of dealing 20 additional points of electrical damage I think a period after "encounter" would be a good idea. Link to comment
lac Posted November 4, 2008 Share Posted November 4, 2008 Shadow Armor +3 Furthmore --> Furthermore allowing to perform thieving and casting movements without efforts -> allowing the performance of thieving and casting movements without effort though I would rewrite the whole sentence as Either through magic, or by design, this armour encumbers no more than normal clothes, allowing thieving and casting while being worn. I wonder if you really want to restrict this item only to thieves? Rangers, especially those restricted to leather armour, would dearly love to wear it for the stealth abilities. And, on the surface, there seems no reason why fighter mages, or cleric mages such as Aerie couldn't wear such a thing. Monks, I guess would like it too, but since I never play a monk, I wouldn't know that for certain. Link to comment
Salk Posted November 5, 2008 Share Posted November 5, 2008 Monks can't wear armours. Also, the Shadow Armour has a background and properties that make a restriction to thieves sensible. Link to comment
lac Posted November 7, 2008 Share Posted November 7, 2008 Golden Lion Figurine In one place he is still a spider Link to comment
lac Posted November 9, 2008 Share Posted November 9, 2008 Nature's Vengeance succesfully hit --> successfully hits Link to comment
lac Posted November 9, 2008 Share Posted November 9, 2008 Belm has as Strength: line in its description, but no strength mentioned. So Strength: <blank> Link to comment
yarpen Posted November 10, 2008 Share Posted November 10, 2008 As far as I am translating this mod (I've ended BOWS) I see a lot of typos. Especially in "Not usable by" section. Link to comment
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