This seems likely to be a result of faulty mod installation on my part, but I wanted to comment that during the family conversation in the Temple District, the first two spots where the PC can say/do anything had the responses coming from Talon Thondar rather than myself. However, once Miranda makes her exit, the replies shifted back to my PC as normal.
Also, during the talk about visitation, one of the replies:
PC: Is this rigid visitation schedule, or can we postpone it when we need to?
My brain may not be interpreting this correctly, but it sounds like it should read "a rigid visitation schedule" instead.
Enjoying the mod, what little I've been able to play of it so far!