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Bugs and typos for v7


Kulyok

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A few potential typos:

 

RE_Minsc.tra:

 

@42 = ~(Sacrifice your dignity, personal space, and possibly your skeletal integrity in the cause of comforting friend.)~

 

comforting friend -> comforting a friend

 

RE_Valyg25.tra:

 

@151 = ~I had no interest in the fire giant, but I admired the tale. Imagine that, <CHARNAME>. A part of you hidden deep beyond the earth and fire, so far away you're barely aware of it. And yet if hungers, and cries, and shivers in the darkness, so that you could live forever. Would you do it if you could?~

 

yet if hungers -> yet it hungers

 

@157 = ~Is it? What if you were dying, now, and only removing your beating heart from your chest would stall it? Wouldn't you reap it out yourself? I don't know if I wouldn't.~

 

reap -> rip

 

@158 = ~But it is a dark choice, hiding a part of myself. I've tried imagining lying in the dark, bound and hidden, and knowing that somewhere far above, under the son, another me lives forever... and I couldn't find any joy in it.~

 

son -> sun

 

@175 = ~Say you'll visit. Say you'll walk with me under the stars, sit and drink on a moonlight lawn and listen to the crickets, leaning on my shoulder.~

 

moonlight -> moonlit

 

@177 = ~If you lose it, I can always make another. But friends don't stand on ceremony: just blast the damn doors open, if you feel like it.~

 

just -> Just

 

@201 = ~Sarevok had his own Gorion. His name was Reiltar Anchev, Winski Perorate and Tamoko. Nothing changed.~

 

Reiltar -> Rieltar

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I so want you to playtest all my mods before release! Thank you so much. Again, I believe that there should be no capital letters after ":", since it's all one sentence, but I'll integrate the rest in the next version.

 

(You know, if you want, I'll be happy to send you all my mods before release. Though there probably wouldn't be any for a while.)

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RE_Valyg25.tra:

 

@92 = ~And a glowy-looking besides. Still, he fooled me.~

 

Maybe "a little glowy-looking"? Or just "glowy-looking"?

 

@124 = ~Have our friendship opened your eyes?~

 

Has.

 

@136 = ~You should probably know that I don't want children. Even if we join in marriage, Corthala line may still die out.~

 

The Corthala line.

 

@158 = ~But it is a dark choice, hiding a part of myself. I've tried imagining lying in the dark, bound and hidden, and knowing that somewhere far above, under the son, another me lives forever... and I couldn't find any joy in it.~

 

Under the sun.

 

@193 = ~True. I'm tempted to kill all humans from time to time, myself.~

 

"Kill everyone" instead? Or perhaps a condition so that it only shows up for non-human PCs? (Wow were my thoughts ever jumbled there, now it properly says what I meant it to say!)

 

@197 = ~I know what you mean. I often felt thus on some posh gathering in Athkatla. Another drink, another 'Lord Corthala, meet my daughter!', and I became seriously tempted.~

 

At some posh gatherings.

 

@199 = ~If our enemies could love, wouldn't all of this be different? If you cared deeply about someone, could you truly cause pain to the innocents?~

 

Pain to innocents.

 

@230 = ~I want to ride next to you on the beach. Or in the boat, watching the sunset. Make love to you on cool white sheets. Call you mine. Hear you call me yours. I love you, <CHARNAME>, and my wedding vows will reflect that.~

 

In a boat.

 

@239 = ~Getting married on the battlefield has certain appeal, too. You think we should ask Solar? But... no. Just no.~

 

Ask the Solar.

 

@21 = ~Another night by a fireside, I'll wager. With a pot of spicy meat stew. See, I can be a prophet, too, when I need to be.~

 

"By a fireside" sounds awkward to me. I'm thinking either "by the fireside" or "by a fire", probably the former.

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